Talk:Christine Choy

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Hey! It looks good. I rearranged some words just to make it flow better. I would add an external link to the movies you mentioned as well as add a bit more in the opening paragraph so it engages readers. Arp1317 (talk) 16:45, 15 November 2015 (UTC)Arp1317

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Peer Edit

A good article, I just changed the word order of a couple sentences and suggest that you could include some of her biographical information in the introductory paragraph. ThanksDamcn174 (talk) 04:35, 16 November 2015 (UTC)

Place of birth?

Reliable sources indicate she was born in Shanghai, not New Hampshire (nor New York, as IMDb claims). I have changed this information accordingly.--Muzilon (talk) 07:40, 27 October 2018 (UTC)