Talk:Christian Bale/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:09, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:09, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Lead

• Great lead; no issues here!

Early life

• This section looks good.

Career

• "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
• "Nolan's three Batman films [...] is" → "Nolan's three Batman films [...] are"
  •  Done I changed the phrase from Nolan's three Batman films to Nolan's Batman film series because the praise was specifically for the films as one franchise. KyleJoan^talk 15:23, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Artistry and public image

• No issues here.

Personal life

• Not sure if "a brain lymphoma" is correct. Maybe just "brain lymphoma"?
  •  Done KyleJoan^talk 15:23, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Acting credits and accolades

• This section looks good.

References

• Can't cite WP:IMDB (#7).
• Don't use WP:ALLCAPS (#12).
• RadioFree.com should be in italics (#35).
• MovieWeb should be in italics (#39).
• MTV should be in italics (#53).
• Overall, just see Template:Cite web#Publisher.
• Mark citations from Esquire with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from The Daily Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
• Mark citations from The Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from The Washington Post with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from Time with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark citations from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
• References are archived.
  •  Done I replaced IMDb with Yahoo! Movies, both of which say the exact quote. KyleJoan^talk 15:23, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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