Talk:Chitty Chitty Death Bang/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: That Ole Cheesy Dude ^{(Talk to the hand!)} 00:08, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, a few changes and it's ready to go.

Specific

• Each first sentence of each paragraph begins with "Chitty Chitty Death Bang", try changing that (it's used 4 times in the lead only).
• A "1 year old" should be "one-year-old"
• Nicaragua needs a link
• "other various characters" various other.
• "Peter lost his watch of the Dukes of Hazzard." This needs clarification.

Could you be more specific? Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Well, what does it mean for one? It doesn't seem to make a lot of sense to me. That Ole Cheesy Dude ^{(Talk to the hand!)} 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

• "When Stewie is packing he takes a bag of Cheerios with him" How is that a reference. Should be removed.
• "called said that" Doesn't make sense. One or the other
• Also the sentence with "called said that" in it needs quote marks.
• Again tv.yahoo is not a very reliable source.

Again? Well anyway, I disagree since the page is owned by Yahoo, but in any case I added a TV Guide link. Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

TV Guide is an even more unreliable source, remove it. I'll accept the Yahoo one, begrudgingly. That Ole Cheesy Dude ^{(Talk to the hand!)} 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Everything else is taken care of. Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

General

• The cultural references section reads like a list of trivia.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   A few changes needed here and there, room for improvement.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): (citations to reliable sources): (OR):

   Pretty good overall, just one unreliable ref.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): (focused):

   Perfic'

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   Perfic'

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Perfic'.

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Okay that's a pass, good job working on this. That Ole Cheesy Dude ^{(Talk to the hand!)} 00:25, 30 June 2011 (UTC)