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Latest comment: 7 months ago by Z1720 in topic Peer review

Peer review

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I've listed this article for peer review because I created this a couple of months ago and it looks great but now i am at the point of how I can expand this more. It is an important organisation in new zealand for the Rainbow community and people living with HIV so I want to make sure it is an amazing article and in hopes to have a GA one day.

Thanks, Bennyaha (talk) 20:20, 15 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • The lead needs to be expanded to include all major aspects of the article.
  • There are uncited statements in the article. I have added "citation needed" where they are.
  • The paragraphs in "Other Campaigns' are too short. These should be merged together, and should not all start with "In 20XX"

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:38, 1 December 2025 (UTC)Reply