Talk:Bess Truman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:47, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:47, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

• The license and source info for File:Elizabeth Truman.png need to be fixed
• All other images properly licensed
• no historical consensus Makes no sense, rephrase to something along the lines: "There is no consensus by historians..." or somesuch.
• if Gates Mansion is the name of her grandparents' house, say so
• Bess also managed household affairs, including finances and child rearing Child rearing is essentially redundant to the bit about Bess being the authority figure in Margaret's life.
• When I see "long gown" I think about ball gowns, etc. Rephrase and clarify
• first lady social secretary awkward, replace first lady with "her"
• destroyed many of her own correspondences Correspondences? Try letters, documents, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:31, 26 December 2022 (UTC)

  All of these issues have been addressed. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 21:34, 28 December 2022 (UTC)