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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Soundofmusicals in topic Bad English?

Bad English?

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The paragraph relating the relationship between the B.R.2 and the Snipe/Salamander grated in all three of its recent incarnations - perhaps less a matter of poor English as clumsy expression (the aircraft was designed around the engine, not the engine for the aircraft) not to mention its being out of place. In a longer article it would have been an important thing to mention in the lead - in a little article like this a single mention in the body is enough - why not under "applications"? Seems logical, at least to my increasingly senile old mind! --Soundofmusicals (talk) 02:29, 5 November 2018 (UTC)Reply