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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Legolas2186 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer:Legolas (talk2me) 17:05, 3 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

The article seems more or less in good shape and there are no outstanding things.

- Not done, I need help for this. Salgado96
  • Infobox, remove the internal wikilink to release history, per WP:IBX we shouldnot direct the readers from one place to another within the same article
- Done. Salgado96
  • Infobox, why the recording locations are made small?
- Done. Salgado96
  • Genres: I can see the article only talking about electro rock and alternative genres. Where the others came from? Seems like WP:OR.
- Done. Salgado96
  • The Beatsound EP cover fails WP:NFCC#3a and WP:NFCC#8. Fails to increase reader's understanding when the original cover is present.
- Done. Salgado96
  • The picture of Slimmy in the Promotion section should be left aligned per MOS:IMAGES.
- Done. Salgado96
  • The reception section. You dont need a separate paragraph for a one line commercial performance. acharts.us cannot be used as a source, and since it did not chart anywhere, you dont even have to source this line.
- Done. Salgado96
  • The personnel require en-dash between them, not a normal dash.
- Not done, I need help for this. Salgado96
  • External links come at the last of the article.
- Done. Salgado96

Very few nitpicky concerns, nominator can easily do them. — Legolas (talk2me) 16:18, 4 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Why aren't you logged in? — Legolas (talk2me) 09:48, 6 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
I decided to do the left over stuff myself, thereby passing this to GA now. — Legolas (talk2me) 15:16, 6 June 2011 (UTC)Reply