Talk:Arch Wolfe

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 17:45, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that one of the duties of Arch Wolfe as an NFL general manager was to prevent his players from fighting the referees? Source: St. Louis Post-Dispatch ("He even acted as a 'fight referee.' Once he hopped the rail and sped out onto the field to separate a fuming Cardinal from an official whose calls had proved highly irritating.")
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The 3:16 game

Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:39, 21 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Arch Wolfe; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 02:51, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: @BeanieFan11: The whole article looks good to me. I just need the QPQ and you're good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine 03:24, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

• @Miraclepine: QPQ added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:47, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
  • @BeanieFan11: Okay. ALT0. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:00, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Arch Wolfe/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:23, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:35, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Added some cats.
• He was in the MLB team's cat instead of the NFL one. I changed it.
• Change lead to American professional football.
  • Changed.
• "Chicago / St. Louis Cardinals from 1933" to "Chicago / St. Louis Cardinals of the National Football League (NFL) from 1933"
  • Changed.
• No date for the pic I guess?
  • Added that it was in 1950.
• "He worked with a rug-cleaning business owned by Charles Bidwill which led to his opportunity in sports" change to "future Chicago Cardinals executive Charles Bidwell"
  • Changed.
• Once you change the above, we can probably remove "which led to his opportunity in sports" otherwise that sentence gets a little wordy?
  • Changed.
• If you do the stuff above, then unlink Chicago Cardinals in the first sentence of the next section.
  • Changed.
• "He served in the position of business manager and, starting in 1936, acted as their general manager" Add commas where bolded.
  • Changed.
• Did you see in the navbox where it says he was an assistant coach? What's that all about?
  • That was added here (after I had created the article) – I changed it to "Executives" since he was not a coach.
• Is there any info on where he went to high school or college or anything?
  • His early life was pretty obscure.

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:35, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:05, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Ok, that's pretty much all there is out there about this guy. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:28, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.