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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Lambtron in topic Content problems

Ballet navbox

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Altenmann, I noticed you removed the ballet navbox that I placed. Was there a reason for that? It is unusual for a navbox to not be transcluded on a page it links to. ~ RobTalk 14:38, 22 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

accident. sorry. - üser:Altenmann >t 14:40, 22 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Content problems

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The lede was recently changed to say aplomb is "the stability of the vertical poise" -- a meaningless phrase. Other recent additions include "the correct set of the body influences all ballet steps" and "exercises at the barre begin the training of the stability and balance". What do these statements mean, and how are they relevant to aplomb? If they are to remain in the article, they must be rewritten in proper English and logically connected to aplomb. I have tagged the problematic sentences to bring attention to these issues; please feel free to remove the tags -- when the problems have been fixed. Lambtron (talk) 17:51, 24 August 2015 (UTC)Reply