Talk:Anthozoa/GA1

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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

• You may want to wikilink marine invertebrates   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• "strengthened by calcareous and other materials," I think "calcerous" is an adjective, so I'd say replace it with "calcium carbonate"

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• In the Diversity section, it sounds like the Octocorallia and Hexacorallia have already been discussed, but they haven't yet. Generally I like to put the phylogeny first to bring up all the broad overview stuff, and then move on into more specific branches later   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• If you wikilink something in the lead, you still have to wikilink it in the rest of the article on first mention (like with "polyp" and "species")   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
• you need to work on your wikilinking, a lot of sciencey words (like "pedal disc" and "siphonoglyphs") aren't wikilinked on first mention   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
• what exactly is "acontia"?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• Be careful when reshuffling sections to make sure everything is wikilinked correctly   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

The wikilinking business is difficult. I have removed some links that were duplicates and added some where the terms first appeared, but I have left some like "taxon" and "taxa", "symbiosis" and "symbiotic", "Antipatharia" and "black coral", and in the tables because I think they are needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• ref no. 20 is incomplete   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

I can't complete it because Google Books is restricting which pages I can access. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• ref no. 21 isn't done correctly   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• Why is Rugosa in the table but not the other Paleozoic anthozoas?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises Rugosa as a valid taxon but not Tabulata or Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

No it's fine, I was just wondering   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• ref no. 32 has a doi 10.1017/S1089332600000073

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• ref no. 6 has a doi 10.5281/zenodo.180149   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• you might want to be consistent on how you form the access dates (like choose between 24-7-17 and 24 July 2017)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• ref no. 31 is missing authors   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

• File:Giant Green Anemone.gif has a deadlink for the source line   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:58, 3 August 2017 (UTC)