Talk:2017 FA Community Shield

Attribution

The introduction and background is based on other Charity/Community Shield articles, such as this one. Lemonade51 (talk) 19:14, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2017 FA Community Shield/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Shall review. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink McDonald's per MOS:BOLDAVOID

Background

• "The FA brought the kick-off time an hour earlier" - brought forward
• Put The Football Association's acryonyms in brackets after the first time it is mentioned

Pre-match

• "he noted they had kept the spine of their team" - could you clarify what is meant by this phrase by rewording it to encyclopedic language?
• "Conte confirmed Eden Hazard and Tiémoué Bakayoko were ruled out of the match with injuries and confirmed Victor Moses would play;" - repetition of confirmed

Team selection

• "he officially took over responsibilities from John Terry in July." -the responsibility

Summary

• The article would be better off if you wrote that the stadium observed a minute's silence for the Grenfell fire victims.

• Not sure what you mean exactly by this. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)

• On second thought, disregard as I have just found out the meaning of moment of silence and it is the same as you have written in the article.

• "The defender was taken off and replaced by Kolašinac," - mention the head injuries as you have done in the first image in the sub-section.
• " when he went to ground in the penalty box after a challenge from Héctor Bellerín." - fell to the ground
• "a late challenge by Pedro on resulted in the Chelsea attacker being shown a red card." - this sentence doesn't say who Pedro callenged on the Chelsea side that led to his red card.

Post-match

• "describing victory as" - the victory

References

• Ref 16 is lacking an author

That is all I found during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 25 December 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96:, have made corrections, thanks for the review. Just one issue with the Grenfell fire in the summary, could do with clarifying here. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)

@Lemonade51: See my above response. Apart from that, this article is now at GA status. MWright96 (talk) 19:00, 26 December 2017 (UTC)