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Latest comment: 4 months ago by PBugaboo in topic NPOV and formatting

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I am a paid scientific writer/editor working part-time with Dr. David Wishart at the University of Alberta and have disclosed this connection in accordance with the Wikimedia Foundation Terms of Use. I have followed the advice of editors in the TeaHouse and deleted the last draft. This current draft has been written from scratch using secondary resources. I welcome independent review and suggestions for improving this draft.

NPOV and formatting

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The article’s tone is somewhat promotional and contains an introduction and conclusion section akin to a report. I would suggest this be reviewed prior to AFC submission :)

Additionally, replacing the bolded headings with section markup would improve the article. I attempted to do this on my commute but I tabbed out and my changes were lost, apologies. PBugaboo (talk) 08:15, 7 May 2026 (UTC)Reply