Talk:Traumatic Livelihood/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 20:14, 15 December 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Camilasdandelions (talk · contribs) 10:26, 20 December 2025 (UTC)

Hello Chchcheckit, I'm gonna review this article within tomorrow. Thank you for your works!

Thank you! Idk if I've presented the lead correctly as a reflection of everything the article says (im thinking of aesthetics, mostly) but yeah aok // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:51, 20 December 2025 (UTC)

@Camilasdandelions everything addressed. // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:20, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

@Chchcheckit the refs were perfect, so I only reguired few changes. Camilasdandelions (talk!) 12:56, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

@Camilasdandelions addressed all other comments. Still not sure about the lead and the presentation of "Bitch with a Gun", and would like yr comment // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:40, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

It seems fine for me! Camilasdandelions (talk!) 13:44, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Review

Chchcheckit Wow, gurl the article looks soooooo good for me. But, let me peak some small probs I found.

Lead

• I bit concern abt that additional album cover in Infbox. Does it satisfy WP:NFCC#8?
  • aghhh i mean ig there hasnt been much coverage to that specific edition, so yk what? it's gone // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:20, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  lol Great! Camilasdandelions (talk!) 12:55, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

• Hm, I'm also not sure whether to italicize "Extended Edition".
  • the source presents it as Traumatic Livelihood – Extended Edition, and I have followed suit ig // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:03, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  Y Camilasdandelions (talk!) 12:55, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Background

• Don't italicize Ones to Watch
  • Fixed // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:02, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Recording and production

• Great!

Composition

• Great!

Release and promotion

• Great!

Critical reception

• Add wikilink to The Forty-Five
  •  Not done I don't think "The Forty-Five" is related to the Jacobite rising of 1745 LMAO (that is the wikilink) // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:56, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  Why tf past of me thought it was a redirect of its own company?! Omg I'm so embarrassed 💀 (hell I've been adding this wikilink in other articles!!) Camilasdandelions (talk!) 12:47, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

• Add wikilinks to the publications, such as NME, DIY ..
  • Fixed somewhat. ah yeah there were some leftover formatting issues. generally i avoid overlinking things so once linked never again?? idk what im saying // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:56, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  Well, no it doesn't seem to violate WP:OVERLINK. Most of articles wikilink like that so no matters! Camilasdandelions (talk!) 12:58, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

• Remove |+Traumatic Livelihood on year-end lists per MOS:HEADERS
  •  Done // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:56, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Track listing

• Why don't you write All tracks were written by Jazmin Bean and Matt Schwartz, except where noted. and remove {{hlist|Bean|Schwartz}}
  • Fixed didn't consider this, wierdly idk // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:59, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Personnel

• Change to Credits were adapted from ~
  • Fixed "credits adapted from" // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:58, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Charts

• Remove |+ Chart performance for Traumatic Livelihood per MOS:HEADERS
  •  Done // Chchcheckit (talk) 10:59, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Refs

• I'll check this after these improved.
  • I'll prolly need to redo commentary on "Bitch with a Gun" and "It's Not My Fault (It's Yours) but aok // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:04, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
  • (INMYIY has been fixed) // Chchcheckit (talk) 12:13, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
    • Y

Overview

• AllMusic, One to Watch, Official Charts Company, Tidal etcs. are better treated as |publisher= bcz they are not italicized.
  •  Done // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:32, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
• The Line of Best Fit, DIY, NME etcs. are magazines, so change {{cite web}} to {{cite magazine}}
  •  Done // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:32, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
• I'm not sure if 1, 14, 15, 16, 17, 33, 42, 45, 46, 50 etcs. are reliable source or not. (Especially, the publications which are not able to wikilink, but except Melodic Magazine as they're listed in WP:A/S)
  • I avoid using unreliable sources for describing things/the reception, unless I am deriving comment from Bean themselves or supporting minor/uncontroversial facts i.e. single release dates, so I don't see this as an issue? // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:25, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  Y. Gonna  Pass this article. Great work! Camilasdandelions (talk!) 13:38, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

  oh damn thanks // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:43, 21 December 2025 (UTC)