Talk:Tennessee/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:48, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add WP:ALT text to every image before used in this article.
  •  Done - please let me know if these are adequate. For multiple images, not sure if I should do an alt for each image, or an alt for the footer. Bneu2013 (talk) 05:43, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "the first permanent European settlers".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add WP:DATECOMMAS after "February 24, 1794", "January 17, 1796", and "June 1, 1796".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "A number of" → "Several" (less wordy)
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "homes in southeastern Tennessee".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a hyphen between "second highest".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "a crucial state during the war".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "After Abraham Lincoln's election as president" → "After Abraham Lincoln was elected president"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "In an effort to pay off debts" → "To pay off debts"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "the largest electric utility in the country".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "abundancy" → "abundance"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add "the" before "natural separation".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "$1 billion".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "This area consists linear parallel ridges" → "This area consists of linear parallel ridges"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "Appalachian Plateau".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "and turning northwest to Clarksville and" – double and
  •  Done - also added Oxford Comma after "Clarksville". Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add "the" before "U.S. Army Corps of Engineers".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Highest average monthly precipitation" → "The highest average monthly precipitation"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "13.4% 65 or older" → "13.4% were 65 or older"
  •  Done - also added "were" after "23.6%". Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a hyphen between "fastest growing".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "2,683,214".
  •  Done - also update figure. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add hyphens between "right to work".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "as low-tax state" → "as a low-tax state"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "a rate of 6%".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "to between" → "between"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "concentrated on the Cumberland Plateau".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "the largest manufacturing sector in Tennessee".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a comma after "corporate headquarters".
  • Fixed - the issue was the word "in" was missing; Franklin is the location of the headquarters. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a hyphen between "second largest".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Stax records" → "Stax Records"
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a hyphen between "longest running".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• "maintaning" – typo
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:08, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "roads or bridges".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:08, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a hyphen between "two thirds".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "legal in Tennessee".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "Democratic Solid South".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Search for WP:ALLCAPS, WP:QWQ, and WP:CURLY in citations.
  •  Done - fixed the all-caps in citations. There doesn't appear to be any instances of the latter two; however, I don't think I have access to a tool to check. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:28, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:35, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:32, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: - I have addressed all the issues listed here. Please let me know if there are still any issues. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:35, 28 July 2021 (UTC)