Talk:Tingyun
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 6, 2026. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that critics considered the apparent death of Tingyun to be the most shocking moment in Honkai: Star Rail? | ||||||||||
Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Kepler-1229b (talk) 16:34, 27 July 2026 (UTC)
- ... that upon the release of a promotional figure for the Honkai: Star Rail character Tingyun, players posted comments wondering whether her fate ingame would ever be revealed? Source: Liu, Stephanie (2024-02-28). "Honkai: Star Rail Tingyun Figure Costs Under $30". Siliconera. Retrieved 2026-05-18.
Gommeh (talk! sign!) 17:01, 20 May 2026 (UTC).
The hook is interesting, article is long enough and well-sourced. QPQ is well done as well. GoldenBootWizard276 (talk) 18:29, 4 June 2026 (UTC)
Pulled per concerns at WT:DYK (permalink) about hook interest. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:48, 28 June 2026 (UTC)
- As I said at DYKT, I think the setup of "Did you know that people posted comments on the internet about X" is an uninteresting fact to anyone without a specialist interest in this subject matter and thus fails WP:DYKINT. People post comments on the internet speculating about everything. While I wouldn't have objected if another queue mover had found it to meet DYKINT, another user also found this uninteresting and the nomination has now been pulled. The usual approach when DYKINT is questioned is for an alternative hook to be developed, and that's what I'd recommend here. There's also some WP:INUNIVERSE language in "Creation and background" that could be revised, and the overall text is somewhat inscrutable to anyone unfamiliar with this game. Dclemens1971 (talk) 13:38, 29 June 2026 (UTC)
- I took a look at the article to see if anything could be used as a hook, but right now it's pretty dense and hard to read, so that might also need to be addressed. With how long the article is, I can imagine it shouldn't be difficult to find a non Genshin fan-targeted hook. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:09, 4 July 2026 (UTC)
- Since this hook fails on DYKINT, here's an alternate hook to consider: ALT1:
... that critics considered the apparent death of Tingyun to be the most shocking moment in Honkai: Star Rail?
The citations for this are the Famitsu and Screen Rant sources. ArtemisiaGentileschiFan (talk) 18:13, 5 July 2026 (UTC)- @ArtemisiaGentileschiFan: I like that one! Let's go with it. Gommeh (talk 🎮 sign) 23:08, 5 July 2026 (UTC)
ALT1 approved. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:34, 7 July 2026 (UTC)
- @ArtemisiaGentileschiFan: I like that one! Let's go with it. Gommeh (talk 🎮 sign) 23:08, 5 July 2026 (UTC)
This nomination is now a week past WP:DYKTIMEOUT, and nearly three weeks have elapsed since a revised hook was approved. Marking for closure given the large backlog of approved nominations. Dclemens1971 (talk) 15:40, 27 July 2026 (UTC)
GA review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: Gommeh (talk · contribs) 17:08, 8 July 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: A.Cython (talk · contribs) 02:51, 9 July 2026 (UTC)
I will review this one as part of GARC#101.A.Cython(talk) 02:51, 9 July 2026 (UTC)
I enjoyed reading about a fictional female video game character. The article is well written and sourced. My comments are presented below.A.Cython(talk) 18:09, 11 July 2026 (UTC)
Various
[edit]- No edit wars
- Neutral
- Broad and focused
- No copyright right issues detected, Earwig's Copyvio Detector gives 11.5%
- Figures have appropriate licences (two are copyrighted but they have fair-use justification), they are appropriate/relevant and have suitable captions
Prose and MoS
[edit]- I made some c/e to speed up the review process, please double check
Sources
[edit]Spot check: 1, 14, 16, 27, 29
- Can you provide a citation at the end of the sentence to support the quote: "steadfast guide"
- That is cited already at source 27. I considered adding another citation to it, but it's generally frowned upon to have two citations to the same source in a row. The beginning of the paragraph up until "what comes next" is cited to that source; let me know if you want me to add another citation to it anyway.
- Ok, but keep in mind that for quotes MOS:QUOTE and WP:V are more important than WP:OVERCITE and WP:REPCITE
- That is cited already at source 27. I considered adding another citation to it, but it's generally frowned upon to have two citations to the same source in a row. The beginning of the paragraph up until "what comes next" is cited to that source; let me know if you want me to add another citation to it anyway.
- Replace or supplement citation #20 with
- Removed.
@A.Cython: done. In solidarity, Gommeh (talk 🎮 sign) 18:29, 11 July 2026 (UTC)
Final comments
[edit]Congratulations to Gommeh for bringing a fictional video game character to GA family. Well done! A.Cython(talk) 18:54, 11 July 2026 (UTC)
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