Talk:Shadow (Final Fantasy)

GA Review

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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 07:23, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Will take this one on within the coming days. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 20:23, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Six GA Criteria

1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.

2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.

3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.

4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.

5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.

6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale, and uses one music file with proper rationale.

Lead

-Looks good

Appearances

-"A distant and standoffish person, in the first half of the game he is an optional party can be hired to help during certain moments of the game, though will leave shortly after." clarify here a little since the typos make it confusing

• Fixed

-"will take an immediate liking to" I'd change to "takes"

• Fixed.

-Clarify that the dog goes with Shadow, since the wording makes it confusing.

• Fixed?

Conception and design

-Looks good

Critical reception

-Looks good

Overall

-Patched up some minor typos where they were easy to do, just patch up those things above and you should be good to go. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 00:24, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

• Should be everything, let me know if anything else needs looking at!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 00:44, 24 April 2024 (UTC)