Talk:Neil Armstrong/GA1

GA Reassessment

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Delisted--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:00, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

I am reviewing this article as part of GA Sweeps. In order for this article to retain its WP:GA designation, it will need some attention. It needs to be brought up to current standards enumerated at WP:WIAGA. I find the following issues to be problematic:

• There are citation needed tags within the article.
• In addition, there are several entire paragraphs of uncited material. Please include at least on inline citation for each paragraph.
• Please fix the disambiguation link

• Titan II GLV link disambiguated.
  — V = I * R (talk) 04:44, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

• Please fix all the deadlinks
• Many images have {{personality rights}} templates, which seems to be a template available at commons. However, the following do not and I do not know why: File:Pilot Neil Armstrong and X-15 -1 - GPN-2000-000121.jpg, File:Armstrong and Scott with Hatches Open - GPN-2000-001413.jpg, File:Apollo 11 crew in quarantine.jpg, File:Quincy Jones, John Glenn, and Neil Armstrong during NASA's 50th anniversary gala.jpg, File:Apollo 11 - Crew at the White House.jpg, File:Neil Armstrong 2004.jpg

• Done. Colds7ream (talk) 17:39, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

• Please make all images compliant with WP:ALT.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:55, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

As these concerns are addressed, I may add more. I will complete my review after a week.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:50, 5 July 2009 (UTC)