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Semi-protected edit request on 1 August 2024
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Change famous sentence to : "That’s one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind.”
The first source seems to say that the "a" part was not said by Neil, but the Nasa source says otherwhise :
At 10:56 p.m. EDT Armstrong is ready to plant the first human foot on another world. With more than half a billion people watching on television, he climbs down the ladder and proclaims: “That’s one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind.”
I think the version of NASA makes more sense. Thanks. Elentirwiki (talk) 15:10, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
Changed to "one small step for [a] man" as in the body. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
"blue. We're breathing again"
[edit]@Michael Bednarek: there wouldn't be any way for someone to know what the reference/meaning of this part of the statement is without the note - unless they are medical professionals/have had experience personally of the problem. (𒌋*𓆏)𓆭 00:24, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
- I suspect you're referring to my reversal of your edit here. I noticed your edit because it removed a file name (a rather famous one) from a {{Listen}} template. It also introduced a new "Notes" section, misplacing it after "References" instead of before. Those were the "other careless flaws" in my edit summary. To your point: I doubt that the comment,
"Skin discoloration is caused by change in the proportion of deoxyhaemoglobin (blue-pigment):oxyhaemoglobin (red-pigment); known clinically as hypoxia causing cyanosis
(missing a full stop here) with the malformed citation- McGee, Steven R. (2012). "II. PATHOGENISIS A. THE BLUE COLOR". Evidence-based Physical Diagnosis (3rd ed.). Elsevier/Saunders. p. 70-72/73.e1. ISBN 9781437722079. Retrieved 31 March 2025 – via Adeyinka, Adebayo; Kondamudi, Noah P. (2021) PMID 29489181.
- would leave readers any wiser – it doesn't require a medical degree to understand what "tuning blue" means. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 01:12, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
Neil armstrong
[edit]hallo my name is jaden jj im from italy and i have a mission i need so much information about neil armstrong ~2026-18217-1 (talk) 09:58, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- do you want me to start from the start ~2026-80942-7 (talk) 19:47, 5 February 2026 (UTC)
- Yes. Start by reading the article.
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:05, 5 February 2026 (UTC)
- And after you've done that, read some of the sources cited in the article. There's a lot of material out there... AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:10, 5 February 2026 (UTC)
- Yes. Start by reading the article.
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Ebiugoebibi (talk) 13:54, 24 February 2026 (UTC)
We should change "Children:3" to the names of Neil's children.
Not done: it's not clear what changes you want made. Please detail the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. {{GearsDatapack|talk|contribs}} 14:15, 24 February 2026 (UTC)
- Template:Infobox person:
Typically the number of children (e.g., 3); only list names of independently notable or particularly relevant children. Names may be preceded by a number to show total children and avoid implying that named children are the only offspring.
Compare with Michael Collins (astronaut), where one of his children is notable. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 23:36, 1 April 2026 (UTC)
- Template:Infobox person:
Children etc missing from Personal Life
[edit]What is the point of the Personal Life section if the only reference to his first marriage is the end of it, and his children aren't mentioned at all?
The content is there, buried in the extensive other sections, but only if you search for it. This should obviously be included in Personal Life - probably before the paragraphs about his religious views and trip to Scotland, for consistency with most similar pages. ~2026-34153-87 (talk) 02:52, 8 July 2026 (UTC)
- Renamed the section "Other activities" to make it more descriptive. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 03:11, 8 July 2026 (UTC)
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