Talk:Mumbra

Travel guide

Hello. I was cleaning up the article and came to the "Hotels and restaurants" section. I believe this entire section needs to be cut because, imho, this is exactly what WP:NOTTRAVEL was made to stop. If a couple of these are notable, then they may be able to be worked into the article, but this list really is too much. Thoughts? Apparition11 (talk) 14:23, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

(edit)On second thought, the same probably goes for everything under Mumbra#Education except for the schools. I'll also note that I removed the addresses and phone numbers for the schools, I would've done this for everything else, but since I don't think any of the rest belong, it would possibly be work for nothing and I don't have a lot of time. Thanks. Apparition11 (talk) 15:06, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

(edit again)OK, I removed the other addresses while I was trying to cleanup a lot of language and grammar. I also removed a lot of WP:PEACOCK words and statements that made it read like a brochure. Apparition11 (talk) 19:03, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Demographics section

Translation issues in Demographics Section

Please consider the following revisions to the English text:

  1) Translate "9 Lakhs" to "900,000"
  2) Capitalize Thane in "Thane urban agglomeration".
  3) Precede Thane with a definite article: "the Thane urban agglomeration".

134.67.10.25 (talk) 12:35, 4 April 2018 (UTC)