Talk:2000 Champions Cup/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 10:17, 13 July 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Prose

Lede

• and the next event following the previous season's World Snooker Championship in May. - I'd rather we just said the first tournament of the season. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:12, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Lede should cover a bit more about how the eight players were chosen Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:12, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• The lede should cover the drugs aspect, as we have a section on it. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:12, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• I generally include the prize money into the lede. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:12, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

General

• Prize money should probably live with the rules section. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• The tournament was created as the Charity Challenge in 1995 - perhaps "first played as", as this tournament wasn't the 1995 Charity Challenge. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Bit sad we don't have a list of who won what to qualify Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Any ideas who picked the wildcard? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• The opening match of the tournament saw Mark Williams, the world champion—recovering from a left thumb injury after being bitten several times by his pet rottweiler at his Cwm home[5]—go up against Ireland's Ken Doherty - this could probably be two sentences Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• faced China Open and Welsh Open runner-up Stephen Lee - did he not win any events? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Maybe the group's stage and knockout could be one section? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Williams would win the match easily on a snookered brown ball in the seventh frame. However, Williams missed the brown bal - this reads like Higgins was snookered... But not? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• Complicated legal and scientific arguments forced the postponement of the injury until 7 January 2001. - injury? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
• The next bit says he was found not guilty, but still was fined? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
  • He was found to used marijuana but not to improve his performance and was still fined MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:17, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Lee Vilenski: Changes have been made to the article based on the queries raised above and have replied to just one point MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 16 July 2021 (UTC)