Talk:Tom Adeyemi
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Club statistics
[edit]There should be consistency with either zeroes or dashes for competitions in which Adeyemi didn't compete in a particular year. Even if dashes are for competitions he was ineligible for, it looks messy, and isn't explained or verified in-line. Meesher (talk) 13:02, 19 July 2015 (UTC)
Place of birth
[edit]There should be consistency about this. The infobox says Milton keynes, but is the source a reliable one? Later in the article it refers to Norwich-born Tom. One can't be born in both Milton Keynes and Norwich. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.3.13.156 (talk) 14:08, 8 August 2015 (UTC)
- Milton Keynes is correct. I'm guessing the confusion has arisen because Mr Adeyemi was raised and educated in Norwich, so is effectively "from" Norwich despite being born elsewhere. Don't know if the family ever lived in MK, or if it was just where his mother happened to be at the critical time. As to sources, the personal profile in the youth team programme cited in the infobox is more likely to have the correct birthplace, because the sort of information in there will have come from the player himself rather than copied and re-copied from stock profiles. The Hugman website also cited shows that the mainstream footballer sites are starting to catch up. We can't use primary documents like birth records as sources for living people, but the transcripts at Findmypast or Ancestry do support the MK birthplace. I've removed the Norwich-born bit. Thanks for noticing the discrepancy. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 14:25, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 13:03, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Will do this one, as well. Courcelles (talk) 13:03, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- "finishing 18th." Needs a ref.
- Oldham, you state fiv emonth loan deal, starting in August, yet he ends his loan in April. This is more than five months, clarify, please?
- " He scored the winning penalty" Could be more explicit this was in a shootout, and not a regular PK
- "He was able to produce a strong performance on the final day of the season, when Birmingham avoided relegation on goal difference, was chosen as the club's young player of the season, and felt that increasing maturity was allowing him to take on more responsibility." Should likely be two sentences.
- What division did Rotherham United play in?
- Has he really not played since "As of match played 30 December 2017"?
- In the refs, use one of "Wales Online" or "WalesOnline".
- Otherwise everything seems to be in order. On hold. Courcelles (talk) 13:28, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Thanks for another review, I've addressed all of the issues raised above. He hasn't played since October 2017 due to injury. Kosack (talk) 15:27, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Alright then, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 15:40, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
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