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Latest comment: 4 months ago by MWFwiki in topic Comments left by AfC reviewers

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  • Comment: I agree with the previous assessment that this cemetery is likely notable for our purposes. However, we have an over-reliance on primary sources and no sources for the "notable burials" section (save for one person).   MWFwiki (talk) 01:26, 7 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Comment: A notable cemetery but the way this article is written sounds more like what you would find on a website of the cemetery, the use of “Our country” isn’t neutral or encyclopaedic (it would be odd if all people referred to a site as “our country” on Wikipedia, especially because millions of users worldwide use it). Also a lot of the paragraphs are unsourced and I think the list of known surnames buried at the site should be placed in an external links area as opposed to at the very start, also this is a nitpick but I believe it would be better if the infobox was higher in the text but that’s just my view on aesthetics.
    Also the “Looking ahead” section strengthens my earlier point on it sounding like what I’d find on the website itself, also finally I don’t think all the names of veterans are required, a handful, perhaps notable or high up officers or ones with Wikipedia pages or other external sources should be mentioned. Mwen Sé Kéyòl Translator-a (talk) 08:45, 2 February 2026 (UTC)Reply