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Latest comment: 18 days ago by Obi1kaboomi 17 in topic Thinkocrat?

Thinkocrat?

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This looks to be a neologism by the subject of the article and makes the lede sound like a PR bio. Actually, a lot of this article reads like a PR bio. At the very least, the word should be removed from the lede and a sentence perhaps specifying that Azarmina describes himself as such would be more appropriate. The term isn't a recognized category of occupation outside of this man's business endeavors, and obviously there isn't a separate article for it unlike the other descriptions in the lede.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Tonsil Crypt Ossuary (talkcontribs) 04:03, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

I've overhauled much of the article to address the promotional tone and formatting issues mentioned. Unrecognized terms and self-coined descriptions have been removed from the lede and body, alongside subjective praise, to ensure strict compliance with [[WP:NPOV]].
Additionally, product codes (ASINs, UPCs) and self-promotional primary links were stripped per [[WP:NOTPROMO]], and lists of self-published material were condensed to maintain balanced [[WP:WEIGHT]]. The layout has been restructured so Early life and education precedes Career following [[WP:MOSBIO]]. The article should now read neutrally. Obi1kaboomi 17 (talk) 03:23, 23 July 2026 (UTC)Reply