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Latest comment: 3 months ago by SmokeyJoe in topic Accepted.

How to make this article more neutral?

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The draft article has been reviewed twice and both times the reviewer stated that the draft reads like an advertisement, but did not identify which parts of the article appear promotional. The article was modelled to some extent on a similar topic, the TEC Awards, which are published on Wikipedia.

After the latest rejection, the article was modified to remove one paragraph that may have seemed promotional and some other content was modified and condensed to avoid repetition, and has been resubmitted.

Reviewers, please be specific on which content you feel contains excess positive praise. I have tried to keep the tone neutral and factual, so would appreciate knowing specifically where it exceeds the guidelines. JASCbd25 (talk) 23:43, 13 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

Comments left by AfC reviewers

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Accepted.

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I accepted this article, despite too much reliance on non independent sources, and a lack of sourced comment from independent sources. I accepted it because I see from google searching that this is a prestigious award, and a large number of existing articles mention Parnelli Awards. SmokeyJoe (talk) 14:59, 29 April 2026 (UTC)Reply