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Latest comment: 1 year ago by It is a wonderful world in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:00, 22 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 19:04, 30 June 2025 (UTC)Reply


This is next on my list :) IAWW (talk) 19:04, 30 June 2025 (UTC)Reply

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) Magenta clockclock

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Lead

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I think "brutal" is a little too strong, I think "intense" is more neutral and less editorialized IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

VEU then moved its programming from KNBN: To where? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

KDFW and KDFI became co-owned in 1999: By who? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Could you add a little information on what the station currently runs? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

History

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Channel 27 was assigned to Dallas in a compromise between two applicants who sought channel 29 in 1965: How was assigning channel 27 a compromise? Explicitness would be appreciated here. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

The change was part of a plan by Overmyer: What change? There are two application changes mentioned in the previous sentence but neither are to do with Overmyer's application. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

by moving the channel 27 allocation: I'm lost by this point, but also how does Overmyer have the power to change channel allocations? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Overmyer dropped out in November 1967 amid an investigation into his businesses: Strictly, it was the Overmyer business that dropped out, not the person, so "his" is wrong here IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

KTWS-TV: The subscription years

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Spell out and link FCC IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

its management believed it would take three to five years for cable to arrive in the city of Dallas: Could you state explicitly that this is relevant because cable would be considered competition to STV. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

"disconnect rate" is a bit vague. Could you explain with precision what statistic you are talking about here. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • I've added an explainer. Quote from article as this is a bugged clipping: In the first nine months of this year, VEU lost about 2,000 subscribers. The disconnect rate has run as high as 8 percent a month. "You can't survive that way," Cassara said.

KDFI-TV: The Dallas Media Investors years

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Can "Western movies" be linked? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Can "secured creditors" be linked to explain the difference between secured and unsecured creditors? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Under KDFW-TV management

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The deal was announced just days: Cut "just" for neutrality and conciseness IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

During the murder trial of O. J. Simpson, KDFI presented a nightly wrap-up show featuring highlights of the day's activity.: This is so different from the narrative built up in the previous part of the paragraph. It feels abrupt. I think it should be split into its own paragraph. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • It does awkwardly split! Moved it down.

MyNetworkTV affiliation

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would have as its charter affiliates 16 stations: I don't really understand this. Is "affiliates" meant to be possessive? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

46 percent of the audience: Which audience? IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Subchannels

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Looks good :)

Analog-to-digital conversion

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Looks good :)

Sources Magenta clockclock

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Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) checkY

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Reliability (Criterion 2b) checkY

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In classic Sammi Brie style there is no issues with reliability

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) Magenta clockclock

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[10]: checkY

[18]: checkY

[24]: checkY

[81]: It says it is expected to take until 2027, not that the the stations will move in by then. IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

I want to flag specifically that some errors in clippings are an issue in GenealogyBank specific to The Dallas Morning News. GBank seems to improperly show clippings when they have metadata for specific articles, which the DMN has.

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) checkY

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Nothing found on Earwig nor the spot check IAWW (talk) 10:33, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) checkY

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Seems complete as always

Stable (Criterion 5) checkY

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Media checkY

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Tags (Criterion 6a) checkY

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Captions (Criterion 6b) checkY

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Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

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A few URLs can be pre-emptively archived to prevent link rot

Modern monetary conversions would be nice

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.