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Latest comment: 9 months ago by NeoGaze in topic Removal of peacock terms/ puffery
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Prior content in this draft duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: https://pacificanetwork.org/community-radio-pioneer-and-rm-2493-co-author-jeremy-lansman-has-died/. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.)

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Removal of peacock terms/ puffery

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hi @Vanilla Wizard,

Thank you for reviewing this article and catching the copyright violations. I'm working to remove the puffery and peacock terms. Are there any that stand out to you that I missed?

Thank you - Wil540 art (talk) 19:05, 12 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Hey @HurricaneZeta, I tried to edit out any puffery or peacock terms and focus on a neutral point of view,. I also rewrote the section with the copyright violations. Could you take another look at this article and tell me if it still feels like an advertisement? Thank you! - Wil540 art (talk) 19:08, 13 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
@NeoGaze Could you also take another look here? Thanks - Wil540 art (talk) 19:09, 13 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
I will take another look at it. NeoGaze (talk) 21:45, 18 October 2025 (UTC)Reply