Talk:First Luv/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Royiswariii (talk · contribs) 09:30, 17 December 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:15, 2 February 2026 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt

 Done

Lead

• "First Luv" is a song by the Filipino girl group Bini → "First Luv" is a song by the Filipino girl group Bini from their third studio album Flames (2025)
• It was released on October 2, 2025 through Star Music. → The track was released as the second single of the album on October 2, 2025 through Star Music.
• Written by Dwta → It was written by Dwta
• like "Blink Twice" and "Cherry on Top". → remove, too much detail
• It was directed by Jason Max and LGBTQ stars Esnyr and Klarisse De Guzman, among other actors → who directed this? Different from the Music Video section. They should be mentioned as LGBTQ stars
• Mention the Accolade and one or two from the Listicles

 Done

Background and release

• Why so much background about "Shagidi"? There is no need for its charts. Keep the first sentence as well as the coachela info
• Blink Twice" and "Cherry on Top" → release dates in between brackets
• They also previewed the music video through an Instagram clip featured the members arranged on a staircase in a stylized, dreamlike setting → They also previewed the music video through an Instagram clip. It featured the members arranged on a staircase in a stylized, dreamlike setting
• Third sentence needs to be merged in one of the other paragraphs
• Wikilink Start Music
• Mention it was released as the second single with source. The way it reads sounds like a bunch of standalone single

 Done

Composition and lyrics

• It is two minutes and fifty-six seconds long → remove it, necessary
• written by Dwta → It was written by Dwta
• Shan → Shan Pooviriyakul
• The second half incorporates a breakbeat instrumental as Mikha and Colet sing. → source?
• The comment of the critic can be a third paragraph
• First talk about the instrumental and then the lyrics, not the other way around
• Sample needs to be in accordance with Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music samples
• Needs meaningful description that add to the article

 Done

Reception

• from critics → from music critics + wikilink to music journalism
• Flames → year of release in between brackets
• The VP Choice Awards and same with the Listicles goes with the second sentence (see below)

 Done

Music video

• as previously seen in the song's concept photos. → source? Removed
• "this perhaps marks the first time that a mainstream [idol] group has unambiguously portrayed same-sex romance—particularly between two women—in an official single" → use your own words more often

  too close to the source, not enough paraphrased. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:29, 18 February 2026 (UTC)

 Done

Charts

• Fine

Accolades

• Move accolades to Reception and eliminate the box

 Done

Listicles

• Move Listicles to Reception on the second paragraph and delete the box

 Done

Credits

• Move it below Music Video

 Done

References

• Ref 4 → Billboard Philippines should be in Italic
• Apple Music is publisher

 Done

Overall

• Let me know when you have addressed the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:58, 2 February 2026 (UTC)

  Hi,MarioSoulTruthFan! I'll ping you once this is done. ROY is WAR Talk! 22:21, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  No problem. I will wait MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:47, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  Hey, MarioSoulTruthFan! I have a question on this: Sample needs to be in accordance with Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music samples, I checked it and it seems still qualified since it didn't exceed 30 seconds, did I missed out?

  • Needs meaningful description that add to the article

  I assume that this is also the description of the music sample, right? ROY is WAR Talk! 04:09, 8 February 2026 (UTC)

  Yes has to be according to the songs length's. Its on the bottom MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 8 February 2026 (UTC)

  Yes as well. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:56, 9 February 2026 (UTC)

  Hi, MarioSoulTruthFan! Can you check it if it's okay to you now? ROY is WAR Talk! 00:41, 18 February 2026 (UTC)

  I will do it during the course of the next days, ok? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:24, 18 February 2026 (UTC)

• @Royiswariii:You missed a couple of stuff. I left a tag next to the stuff you didn't addressed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:40, 18 February 2026 (UTC)

  @Royiswariii: You are not missing a lot and I gave you a hand. Can you just address what is left? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:40, 28 February 2026 (UTC)

  i'm not the nominator nor am i one of the top editors, but i just went ahead and tried to fix the remaining issues. a bit confused about the musical sample thing. what else needs to be fixed? does the audio sample need to be shorter? ~2026-10002-49 (talk) 03:58, 7 March 2026 (UTC)

  MarioSoulTruthFan, I think it is done now. Please check again if I miss again. ROY is WAR Talk! 04:54, 7 March 2026 (UTC)

  @Royiswariii: There is still the sample issue. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:02, 8 March 2026 (UTC)

  can you please explain what the remaining issue with the sample is? is it length? ~2026-10002-49 (talk) 00:46, 8 March 2026 (UTC)

  Again is above? Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music samples. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:54, 8 March 2026 (UTC)

  Yes the length its too large. Should be around 16/17 seconds. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:58, 13 March 2026 (UTC)

  MarioSoulTruthFan  Done. ROY is WAR Talk! 04:18, 15 March 2026 (UTC)

  Good job! I will pass it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:01, 15 March 2026 (UTC)