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Latest comment: 1 month ago by Miminity in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: Georgeykiwi (talk · contribs) 13:35, 28 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Miminity (talk · contribs) 10:25, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Bene (2017–2018); no mention in the body about changing her in 2018.
Article says "and changed her name to Benee around this time". It seems to have happened between "Evil Spider" and "Want Me Back", so changed to 2019.--Launchballer 10:59, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • Source 1: Can you provide a quote of the text where the pronunciation is mention as it is paywalled.
"First the name. Pronounced Benny, she originally went by Bene but found people didn't know how to pronounce it, so she recently added an extra 'e' to make it easier and to lose the association with a cafe brunch staple...".--Launchballer 10:59, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 2: no issue
  • No issue

2000–2020: Early life and "Supalonely"

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  • Source 3: No issue
  • Source 4: No issue
  • Source 5: No issue
  • Source 7: No issue, but | birth_place parameter on the infobox should be remove as there is no mention she was born in the area. I suggest replacing it with | origin
Done.--Launchballer 10:59, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 8: No issue
  • an attempt at a communications degree at the Auckland University of Technology was aborted after a meltdown less than two weeks in, weird phrasing, maybe change it to a clearer and a more straight forward one and maybe add something about this “I knew I wanted to do something in the creative industry, but I wasn’t 100-percent on anything,”... I just cried to my parents, and they basically told me to focus on the music and give it a solid shot. That’s when it clicked.”. (Source 11)
Reworded. I tend to avoid using WP:INTERVIEW quotes unless I have to; no objection to any other co-nominator adding this.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • She took up the saxophone aged eight and the guitar in primary school, though briefly dropped music in favour of water polo. This whole sentence should be before the communication degree sentence
Moved.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 12: Maybe add something about this I had been working on music in sessions that I had to fit in with the last year of high school and playing water polo all the time. and add information of her writting "Tough Guy" around this time.
See above.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 14: Not a controversial claim so no issue
  • Source 15: The source is dead, I just tagged it and it is also reliable for music; maybe add the year (2017)?
Context already makes this clear; she turned 17 in January 2000 and released her first single in 2017.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • After Universal Music New Zealand enquired about them, her mother contacted her friend Paul McKessar... The pair worked together on both her 2017 debut single "Tough Guy" and her September 2018 single "Soaked no mention in the source. (Source 15, 5, 16)
Replaced with one that does.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 19, 21, 22: no issue
  • Source 26: She promoted the last of these by releasing a music video for EP track "Glitter" no mention of promotion.
See below.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 27, 28, 30, 31, 33: no issue
  • Source 34: the 39 there is not Top 40, as I think US does not have any Top 40 charts, it is Billboard Hot 100 per source
All top 100 charts also have top 40 subsets.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 38, 39, 42, 43, 46: no issue
  • I put quotation on "bitch". I suggest providing a little bit of context on who is Judith Collins. Source: 4, 48: no issue
Added a brief qualifier.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Change the sentence to an the International Achievement Award, alongside Jawsh 685, ... per source. Source 50: no issue
You changed this yourself and I changed it back because this particular award is sometimes awarded more than once in a given year and I consider the other winner WP:INDISCRIMINATE.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source: 52: no issue
  • Source 53: the source does not say that "Happen To Me' is a single
Source certainly describes a single, but sure, added another source.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 55: no mention of the music video using as a promotion
See below.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

2021–present: Lychee and Ur an Angel I'm Just Particles

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  • Source 58, 61, 65, 66, 67: no issue
  • Source: 70: 71 ... designed to reduce anxiety as she felt that many young people were overly stressed this is a borderline WP:BIOMED information and needed a WP:MEDRS than a simple WP:RS. I suggest attributing the claim of "reducing anxiety".
"Borderline"'s doing quite a lot of lifting there I think ('designed to' does not mean 'does'), but I found a 2025 study that the first part's in, so added it to the existing references.--Launchballer 08:29, 8 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source: 73: A study comparing "Bagels" with five other tracks including the then-most relaxing song in the world ("Weightless" by Marconi Union) found that "Bagels" reduced anxiety by 5% more than "Weightless". I check the original research it says This article is a preprint and has not been certified by peer review (here). Although, The Sydney Morning Herald is reliable, the research itself it not reliable so this should be remove as this is, again, borderline WP:BIOMED information.
Replaced with the above study.--Launchballer 08:29, 8 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 74, 76, 80, 81, 84, 87: no issue
  • Source 91: no mention of using the song as promotion or a music video of the song
See below.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 93: 503 bad gateway for me
This the Elle source, right? Seems to work for me, suggest trying it again.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 94: no issue
  • Best New Artist, The source say Best Pop Artist. Source 96
Fixed.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Artistry

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  • Source 99: no issue
  • Source 48: not directly stated but, I guess its okay
  • Source 102: no issue
  • As wikipedia does not have article for "genre-agnostic", I suggest briefly define it here.
It just means that she doesn't stick to one genre. I've reworded.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 103: no mention of genre, maybe remove this one
That source says "an introspective record bending between alt-pop, house, trap, and drum and bass", which I think is covered by "Benee's music encompasses a wide range of genres".--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Discography

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  • No issue

Filmography

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  • Unreferenced and is the table necessary this could be formatted as simple as this:
  • Head South (2024) - Kirsten[ref]
Converted to bullet point; see below.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Awards and nominations

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  • Source 104, 111, 114: no issues
  • Longlisted? isn't just nominated per the wording in the source, Source 116
Fixed.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Source 118, 119, 121: no issues

Tours

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  • Source 122, 124, 59, 127, 129: no issues
  • no issue

Misc.

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  • the 45.1% flagged on Earwig is from this which is the website copy of the lead of the article. The teen vogue one is a quote and the rest is false positive. No issue
  • Photo has caption and tagged correctly
  • The article is stable

Other issues

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  • The article contains many duplicate citations, which was tagged by DuplicateReferences script. I suggest fixing the problems above before fixing this issue so the review above is not chaotic.
@3f45188: got this before I could get there. As for the above, I'll address the rest another time, though will offer the preliminary comments that a) any top 100 also has a top 40, b) the filmography doesn't need references as the film itself counts as a primary source (though will mull a bullet point rather than a table), and c) that Bagels stuff is going to hurt to remove, since that's where the DYK is!--Launchballer 20:36, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
You mentioned a couple of times above about 'promotion' not being in the source, so I'll address it here. I think it is SKYISBLUE that a music video for a non-single track from a major work such as an EP/album serves to promote that major work. Either of my conominators are free to override me on this, but I don't think this is a problem. I need longer to decide what to do about Bagels.--Launchballer 15:50, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, I'd agree with the above. George (talk) 20:36, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
I think all changes have been made now @Miminity, let us know on the above though! George (talk) 00:02, 13 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Summary

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Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.