Talk:Arthur Hoag

Wording

"He was the son of Harvard Medical School, Cornell, and University of Michigan faculty member Lynne Arthur Hoag and wife Wylma Wood Hoag. "

There has to be a better way of saying that. I'ma trying to find one --Gargletheape (talk) 06:00, 4 February 2013 (UTC)

Rewriting article

Hey everyone, it seems like Arthur Hoag's article needs some love so I'm going to start adding to and rewriting this page. This will be my primary work in my sandbox, feel free to stop by on my talk page if you have any advice. TouchMeTwice (talk) 19:52, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Hi! Are you still working on Arthur Hoag's page rewrite? If not, I would like to give it a go with some additional information. Thanks! PushawLoon (talk) 04:16, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

Rewriting article

I will be working on a rewrite of the article to incorporate more information. If you have anything you would like to add or any advice, please let me know. I'll be working on this in my sandbox. Thanks! PushawLoon (talk) 16:21, 3 December 2024 (UTC)

I just made my rewrite live. If you have any comments, corrections, or suggestions to improve it, please let me know! Thanks. PushawLoon (talk) 16:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)