Talk:Yifat Bitton

Expansion

To Do:

• Clarify what the Hadassah prize is, and how important it is (or isn't). (see the New Israel Fund UK 2014 report mentioning what appears to be the same award)
• Add information on her judicial career. She apparently was a judge on the Lod District Court
• Clarify the name, work and structure of Tmurah
• Flesh out her opinions on the social issues she fights for, such as discrimination against the mirzahi for example
• Clarify her degrees and education, as well as her teaching/lecturing activities

Y A personal life section Y A Picture

does this count as a WIR triumph if there was no prior redlink? Hydromania (talk) 09:26, 28 June 2019 (UTC)

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:06, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

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Prof. Bitton

• ... that Prof. Yifat Bitton was shortlisted twice for Israel's supreme court?
  • ALT1:... that Prof. Yifat Bitton, an anti-discrimination lawyer, announced her run for Israel's Knesset?
    • ALT2:... that Prof. Yifat Bitton, a women's rights lawyer, was the youngest woman ever nominated to serve on the Supreme Court of Israel?

Created by Hydromania (talk). Self-nominated at 08:26, 3 July 2019 (UTC).

• :REVIEW COMPLETED - The following review was completed by Thats Just Great

First DYK so no QPQ required

Article created by Hydromania on June 28, 2019 with 1691 characters (281 words) "readable prose size"

NPOV

Original Hook is interesting, short enough and sourced with Hebrew language Refs

Hook is sourced to

• Attorney Yifat Biton, who was born and raised in the city, was presented last week as a candidate for a Supreme Court justices
• Bitton was shortlisted twice for Israel's Supreme Court ... making history as the youngest woman to ever appear on the list
• Bitton has been shortlisted twice for Israel’s Supreme Court (2016, 2018), making history as the youngest woman to ever appear on the list

Every paragraph sourced

Earwig @ Toolserver Copyvio Detector found no copyvio

GTG -- Thats Just Great (talk) 16:23, 29 July 2019 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote this, but frankly, I don't see what's hooky about any of the hooks. Can't you say something about what she actually achieved? Yoninah (talk) 22:54, 30 July 2019 (UTC)

• @Yoninah: What about ALT3? -- Thats Just Great (talk) 15:53, 1 August 2019 (UTC)

• ALT3 ... that in addition to founding the Tmurah Anti-discrimination center, which fights for the rights of women who have suffered abuse, Prof. Yifat Bitton was also twice shortlisted for Israel's supreme court?

• Thank you, that's better. But I think it should be tightened, and the spelling of the name corrected. How about:
• ALT3a: ... that in addition to founding Tmura, an anti-discrimination center that advocates for the rights of women who have suffered abuse, Yifat Bitton was shortlisted for Israel's Supreme Court twice? Yoninah (talk) 17:01, 1 August 2019 (UTC)

• Looks great @Yoninah: -- Thats Just Great (talk) 17:50, 1 August 2019 (UTC)

• Thank you. New hook fact in ALT3a verified and cited inline; other hook ref AGF and cited inline. Rest of review per Thats Just Great. ALT3a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 18:36, 1 August 2019 (UTC)

Please review

Hey @Number 57: @Ynhockey: @Icewhiz:, You seem to be pretty prolific editors at Wikiproject:Israel. Would you mind taking a look at this article and improving it? Hydromania (talk) 23:09, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

Hi Hydromania,

Thanks for creating the article. It gives a good basic overview of the subject, but there are a few problems with the style:

• The article is more of a list of points than prose
• It uses time-sensitive phrasing (e.g. "curretly")
• In places, it's written in a promotional tone (note: if you have a personal connection to the subject, disclosure is mandatory)
• The sections are organized in a way that highlights the subject's career, instead of being in chronological order

Hope this helps with improving the article in general, and the DYK nomination in particular.

—Ynhockey ^(Talk) 16:57, 7 July 2019 (UTC)