Talk:WNJU/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:41, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Add a comma after "New Jersey, United States" (WP:GEOCOMMA). Also add a serial comma between "Black, Jewish and Italian".
• (It opted not to move to the World Trade Center when it was built for financial reasons.) Should this entire sentence be in parentheses?
• I believe citations should be outside of the closing parenthesis. ) → ) and ) → )

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: If it applies only to the material in the parentheses, no. See MOS:PF: Where a footnote applies only to material within parentheses, the ref tags belong just before the closing parenthesis. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:43, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma between "Yankees, New York Knicks and New York CityHawks".
• "took effect April 2, 2018" → "took effect on April 2, 2018"

 Working I will be going through every source to verify the article's information. this will take me some time

Ref check complete. Great work! Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:57, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Progress

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed