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Latest comment: 7 months ago by DBHaru in topic Tone

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Right now the article reads sort of like an advertisement. The subjective qualities of the art and artists are being described as though they were factual. I don't want to just start rewriting the article before discussing it though, maybe I'm off base here. Any input on this would be much appreciated. Thank you in advance! DBHaru (talk) 02:40, 26 December 2025 (UTC)Reply