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Latest comment: 4 years ago by Heartmusic678 in topic Updated Technology request

Starting article

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I started this article (June 2014) and hope to expand it a bit in the coming weeks. I work for SiSense, and am striving to observe best practices by presenting only factual information cited to high quality independent sources. I look forward to feedback from uninvolved Wikipedians. -Itayerez (talk) 07:37, 11 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

I am about to add a history section to this article. Next week I plan to add another section on SiSense's technology. Feedback and improvements welcome as always. -Itayerez (talk) 11:55, 2 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

Technology request

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This is a request submitted for Sisense: I am an employee of the company and work in the communications department. I joined the team fairly recently and over the last couple months, I have been educating myself about Wikipedia's best practices. Our company has made some missteps here in the past due to lack of knowledge about the Terms of Use and guidelines, but I intend to follow the rules and help fix the issues on the Sisense page. Based on my understanding so far, a fair number of the references are not what Wikipedia editors would prefer . To get started on fixing these, I wanted to make a request for the "Technology" section where the references seem worst and where the content feels very jargony (even in my eyes!). I've found some new links to better sources (TechCrunch, ZDNet and CIO) to replace the blog posts and non-reliable sources used (Solutions Review, KM World, KD Nugget etc). I've tried to keep this short and simple, so the drafted content is a basic overview of the company's technology:

Can this draft be used to replace the existing Technology text and references? Looking forward to comments and feedback! Kat at Sisense (talk) 19:44, 20 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

 Not done @Kat at Sisense: the prose is written as if it is the company's website rather then an encyclopedia. In addition, Wikipedia is not interested in what a company says about itself so content attributed to what a representative states is unusable (interviews, "it claims"," it states" are red flags). I will leave you some additional information on your talk page. S0091 (talk) 23:24, 28 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thank you, User:S0091. This is really disappointing to hear, but I am very appreciative of the feedback so I can go back and improve this. I know the Technology content on the page right now is not at all ideal for Wikipedia (the sourcing and the way it's written), and I want to help improve it. So I'm understanding your feedback correctly, are you suggesting that I should not use some of the sources that I've included in my draft? If so, which ones? Or is it that I should only include details from them that are not attributable to the company in the source? Appreciate it! Kat at Sisense (talk) 18:42, 9 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. 1 2 Miller, Ron (May 14, 2019). "Sisense acquires Periscope Data to build integrated data science and analytics solution". TechCrunch. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  2. 1 2 Lunden, Ingrid (January 9, 2020). "Sisense nabs $100M at a $1B+ valuation for accessible big data business analytics". TechCrunch. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  3. 1 2 Olavsrud, Thor; Sayer, Peter (January 15, 2021). "Top 12 business intelligence (BI) tools for 2021". CIO. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  4. 1 2 3 4 Adams, R. Dallon (May 4, 2021). "The 5 best data visualization tools for every business". ZDNet. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  5. "Sisense Pulse uses machine learning to trigger data anomaly alerts – TechCrunch". techcrunch.com. Retrieved 2018-06-12.

History request

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This is a request submitted for Sisense: I am an employee of the company and work in the communications department. While I work on improving my request for the Technology section, I wanted to continue to see if I can help with fixing issues with this page. This request is for the History section. I've tried to make it read more like a history of the company rather than a list of funding round announcements, add some sources to make sure that everything has a citation (there are a couple of sentences in the History now that are unsourced), and remove wording that didn't seem encyclopedic (for example "stealth mode", "with participation from", "cementing its status").

Can this draft be used to replace the existing History text and references? Once again, looking forward to comments and feedback! Kat at Sisense (talk) 18:46, 9 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi again, I'm following up here to see if any past editors such as User:MB would be willing to look at this request? I was looking at the edit history and saw that MB had added the "advert" tag to the page: with this request I'm aiming to clean up some of the promotional, un-encyclopedic wording, improve sourcing, and make this section read more like a history of the company than a list of funding round announcements, to help address the issues you flagged. Thank you. Kat at Sisense (talk) 21:23, 26 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Kat at Sisense:  Done. I did not include the press release source for Bendov's appointment and replaced it with his Bloomberg profile only to confirm his start date as CEO. Thanks, Heartmusic678 (talk) 12:45, 28 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. 1 2 3 4 Orpaz, Inbal (December 17, 2012). "Israeli start-up makes big data bite-sized". Haaretz. Retrieved August 12, 2021.
  2. Nathan, Eddy (August 11, 2009). "SiSense Offers Business Intelligence Tools for Cost-Conscious Companies". eWeek. Quinstree. Retrieved August 30, 2021. SiSense, a provider of business intelligence tools for small to midsize businesses[.]
  3. Goldenberg, Roy (November 28, 2012). "Big data analytics co SiSense raises $8m". Globes. Retrieved August 18, 2021.
  4. 1 2 "Sisense hires Amit Bendov as CEO". Silicon Valley Business Journal. July 17, 2012.
  5. 1 2 Lunden, Ingrid (June 12, 2014). "Sisense Raises $30M More To Bring Big Data Analytics To Businesspeople". TechCrunch. Retrieved August 12, 2021.
  6. 1 2 Hirschauge, Orr (June 12, 2014). "'Big Data for Little Computers' Firm Sisense Raises $30 Million". The Wall Street Journal. Dow Jones & Company, Inc. Retrieved August 18, 2021.
  7. Cohen, Tova (May 27, 2014). "Israel's SiSense sees surging demand for data analytics software". Reuters. Retrieved August 18, 2019.
  8. 1 2 Gage, Deborah (January 7, 2016). "Under New CEO, Sisense Raises $50M". The Wall Street Journal. Dow Jones & Company, Inc. Retrieved August 12, 2021.
  9. Shulman, Sophie (September 2, 2020). "Valuation Is a Milestone, Not a Cause for Celebration, Says Sisense CEO". Calcalist. Yedioth Ahronoth Group. Retrieved August 12, 2021.
  10. "Sisense Raises Another $80M to Continue Pushing The Limits of Data Extraction". AlleyWatch. September 17, 2018.
  11. 1 2 Cohen, Tova (May 5, 2019). "Data analytics firm Sisense buys U.S. firm Periscope Data". Reuters. Retrieved August 18, 2019.
  12. 1 2 Miller, Ron (May 14, 2019). "Sisense acquires Periscope Data to build integrated data science and analytics solution". TechCrunch. Retrieved August 18, 2021.
  13. Halon, Eytan (January 11, 2020). "Meet Sisense - Israel's latest "unicorn"". The Jerusalem Post. Jpost Inc. Retrieved August 18, 2021.
  14. Brust, Andrew (19 February 2021). "As Power BI aces Gartner's new Magic Quadrant, what's the story behind Microsoft's success?". ZDNet. Retrieved 19 February 2021.
  15. Whiting, Rick (March 15, 2018). "Here's Who Made Gartner's 2018 Magic Quadrant For Business Intelligence And Analytics Platforms". CRN. The Channel Company. Retrieved August 18, 2021.
  16. Ghahremani, Yasmin. "Tech Companies to Watch 2019: Sisense". CFO. Industry Dive. Retrieved May 2, 2019.
  17. "Gartner Magic Quadrant for Analytics and Business Intelligence Platforms". Gartner. February 11, 2020. Retrieved August 18, 2021.

Updated Technology request

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This is a request submitted for Sisense: I am an employee of the company and work in the communications department. I'm following up with a fresh request for the "Technology" section, after editing my draft based on feedback received above. As I mentioned before, the references in the existing section are not good (blog posts and non-reliable sources such as Solutions Review, KM World, KD Nugget etc) and the content feels very jargony. I've trimmed down my draft and updated it, removing the sourcing that used a lot of Sisense's perspective.

To explain my reasoning behind these changes, here is a breakdown of the current Technology text and sources, compared with my suggestions:

Does this updated draft work to replace the existing Technology text and references? Looking forward to comments and feedback! Kat at Sisense (talk) 21:26, 26 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

 Done with a few edits to adhere to a neutral tone. I removed any redundant content as well as the ad tag due to the updates. Thanks, Heartmusic678 (talk) 12:03, 29 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. 1 2 Lunden, Ingrid (January 9, 2020). "Sisense nabs $100M at a $1B+ valuation for accessible big data business analytics". TechCrunch. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  2. 1 2 Olavsrud, Thor; Sayer, Peter (January 15, 2021). "Top 12 business intelligence (BI) tools for 2021". CIO. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  3. 1 2 3 Adams, R. Dallon (May 4, 2021). "The 5 best data visualization tools for every business". ZDNet. Retrieved August 1, 2021.
  4. "Sisense Pulse uses machine learning to trigger data anomaly alerts – TechCrunch". techcrunch.com. Retrieved 2018-06-12.
  5. Whiting, Rick (January 10, 2020). "Big Data Developer Sisense Raises $100 Million In Financing, Hits $1 Billion Market Cap". CRN. Retrieved October 10, 2021.
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  8. King, Timothy (9 February 2021). "Sisense Announces AI-Driven Analytics Platform Called Sisense Fusion". Solutions Review. Retrieved 9 February 2021.
  9. Simone, Stephanie (10 February 2021). "Sisense Fusion provides analytic support for customers and employees". KMWorld. Retrieved 10 February 2021.
  10. Cite error: The named reference KDNuggetsMay13 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  11. 1 2 Cite error: The named reference BusinessIntelligenceNov13 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  12. Cite error: The named reference DataNamiOct13 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  13. Cite error: The named reference DatabaseOct13 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  14. "Sisense Pulse uses machine learning to trigger data anomaly alerts – TechCrunch". techcrunch.com. Retrieved 2018-06-12.