Talk:Queen Anne Pool/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:30, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 00:32, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Dibsing. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 00:32, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

• Oh neat I was like 10 minutes down the road from this pool when I was in Seattle in March
• "the pool construction" lightly awkward? "the pool's construction" or "pool construction" or even "construction of the pool" might be better
• "adjacent to the McClure Middle School" - I know it's the lead but this comes out of nowhere. What does the school have to do with the pool?
• Any specific reason why they were built near high schools? Swimming classes for PE?
• "After public debate and delays from deliberations" this feels a bit redundant
• "their costs went on...total cost..." cost twice in one sentence, minor nitpick
• loooool why in god's name would a pool building in Seattle only be half damp proofed

Images are appropriately used and properly licensed, no CV issues that I can find. Spot checks on available sources indicated no issues.

That's all I got. A nice tidy little article. Those are minor notes/thoughts, nothing that impacts the article meeting the GACR, so I'm going to promote and leave them as suggestions. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 02:47, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

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