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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Dkistheedge in topic Second part of introduction?

Language heavily favours sceptics

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I'm going to be fixing part of this because the page uses words like "notes" and others to lend weight to the skeptics. Tiggy The Terrible (talk) 08:55, 1 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hey @Black Kite:, could you tell me which specific parts you had problems with and which were the weasel words? As far as I can tell, I've removed several weasel words like 'noted' from the page. Tiggy The Terrible (talk) 11:38, 1 April 2022 (UTC)Reply
WP:CLAIM is the main issue, I think. Black Kite (talk) 11:56, 1 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Second part of introduction?

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The second part contains no source and is written with very flawed grammar. Feels almost like something written by someone connected to the author? Dkistheedge (talk) 20:53, 18 May 2024 (UTC)Reply