Talk:Maple leaf cream cookie
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 31, 2026. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that astronauts orbiting the Moon celebrated the moment at which they lost contact with Earth by eating maple leaf cream cookies? | ||||||||||
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Beta Beta Beta (talk) 20:39, 25 August 2026 (UTC)
- ... that while orbiting the Moon, astronauts celebrated the moment they lost contact with Earth by eating maple leaf cream cookies?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Wang Wang and Fu Ni
- Comment: This dyk was on the Russian wiki.
Thepharoah17 (talk) 11:12, 24 August 2026 (UTC).
A nice article on a very delicious cookie. Some comments:
- 5x expansion qualifies and article is long enough.
- QPQ has been done.
- Copyediting is needed to smooth out what I'm guessing is translation clunkiness. (For example,
According to recommendations, maple cookies go well with hot chocolate or cider , both alcoholic and non-alcoholic
. I'm guessing we don't even need this sentence per WP:NOTCOOKBOOK.) The hook fact in the article is not encyclopedically phrased. (This moment was particularly emotional for the astronauts—the crew put aside their duties and briefly gathered, about 30 seconds, to share maple cookies, marking this " surreal moment."
) - The article has multiple paragraphs missing citations and these need to be addressed before approval. (The sources in the article do appear to be reliable.)
- Is this cookie really most famous for being sent into space? That accounts for about half the body text. I am not sure, but this might be imbalanced if there is more non-space content out there on this cookie.
- Photo is not approved for use; not only is it not in the article, but it would be a WP:DYKDIVERT failure. If you'd like me to assess another photo, please add it to the nom.
- Thanks Thepharoah17, please respond when you have a chance. Dclemens1971 (talk) 20:25, 24 August 2026 (UTC)
- @Dclemens1971: I fixed up the article (copyedited, added sources), and removed the image for the hook. Thepharoah17 (talk) 21:35, 24 August 2026 (UTC)
- I also added some more info. Thepharoah17 (talk) 23:42, 24 August 2026 (UTC)
Thank you for the improvements. With the cleanup, this is now ready for the main page. Dclemens1971 (talk) 14:01, 25 August 2026 (UTC)
Imbalance
[edit]Hi Thepharoah17, so nice you’ve translated my article, appreciate that. Will be cool to see it on a main Wiki-page :) It may look quite imbalanced because 1. I’m kind of space fan 2. couldn’t find any info about commercial “supermarket” cookies (may be should try harder). By the way I also wrote connected articles : Canasnack and adorable Rise, Artemis2 zero-gravity indicator, which also have appeared on our Russian DYK page. So welcome to translate ! Clarettt (talk) 07:11, 26 August 2026 (UTC)
- Ok ya, I’m glad you're happy that it showed up on this wiki too. Ya I did look through your articles created and contemplated translating those too. I might translate them. Thepharoah17 (talk) 07:17, 26 August 2026 (UTC)
- I'm not a prolific user, but trying to create content that don't exist in the English Wiki. same time too lazy myself to translate :) Rise is my very favourite ! As for this article I was happy when Ukrainian user had translated it, although partly, into Ukrainian. Clarettt (talk) 07:38, 26 August 2026 (UTC)
Re: SFBA
[edit]We used to buy these in San Francisco Bay Area bakeries from the 1970s to the 1980s, but I haven't seen them in a long time. Was this because Canadians owned the bakeries? Viriditas (talk) 00:35, 28 August 2026 (UTC)
Short lead
[edit]@Thepharoah17 and Noleander: Is there any way the lead of the article can be expanded? It's particularly short for a Good Article, and leaves out a fair amount of interesting and notable details from the body. Specifically adding any information from the History, "Obama cookie", and "In space" sections I think would greatly improve the leads coverage of the article as a whole. Cheers! Johnson524 02:49, 7 September 2026 (UTC)
- Yes, that is a good suggestion. Noleander (talk) 03:58, 7 September 2026 (UTC)
- I was thinking about the same thing. I’ll try to expand the lead. Thepharoah17 (talk) 04:31, 7 September 2026 (UTC)
- Thank you! 😄 Johnson524 04:50, 7 September 2026 (UTC)
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