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A fact from Lunch trading appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 23 July 2026 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Beta Beta Beta (talk) 06:48, 19 July 2026 (UTC)
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- ... that students trading lunches in schools have been called black markets?
- Source: Harrington 2015: "Children are creating their own black markets to trade and sell salt due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s school lunch rules."
- ALT1: ... that one researcher described students trading lunches in schools as "the underlife of school lunchtime"? Source: Nukaga 2008, p. 354: "The giving and receiving of food, which involved minor resistance and challenge to school rules, constituted the underlife of school lunchtime [emphasis in original]."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rush Hour (sculpture)
Jude Halley talk/contribs 02:32, 8 July 2026 (UTC).
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Clean up AI-like phrasing and redundant content
[edit]Several parts of this article, particularly the "Values of foods and drinks" section, currently read like unedited LLM output. Statements such as "the most commonly traded parts of a meal include main courses, vegetables, and desserts" are self-evident and flatten the context of the underlying source (which was actually studying nutritional trade-offs). Additionally, phrases like "such exchanges form economies, with students as economic agents" feel overly clinical and unnatural. I suggest a brief copyedit to clean up redundant statements and smooth out the prose. ~2026-41183-96 (talk) 21:15, 23 July 2026 (UTC)
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