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Latest comment: 15 days ago by ~2026-41183-96 in topic Clean up AI-like phrasing and redundant content

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Beta Beta Beta (talk) 06:48, 19 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Source: Harrington 2015: "Children are creating their own black markets to trade and sell salt due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s school lunch rules."
Fletcher et al. 2014, p. 506: "Drawing on two qualitative studies, we report evidence of pervasive black markets in confectionery, 'junk' food and energy drinks in English secondary schools."
Created by JudeHalley (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Jude Halley talk/contribs 02:32, 8 July 2026 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.
    Overall: New enough, long enough, adequately sourced, neutral, and no obvious copyvio concerns. Hooks are cited, interesting, and under 200 characters. QPQ provided. Approving both hooks; original and ALT1. Umais🗣 07:42, 9 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

    Clean up AI-like phrasing and redundant content

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    Several parts of this article, particularly the "Values of foods and drinks" section, currently read like unedited LLM output. Statements such as "the most commonly traded parts of a meal include main courses, vegetables, and desserts" are self-evident and flatten the context of the underlying source (which was actually studying nutritional trade-offs). Additionally, phrases like "such exchanges form economies, with students as economic agents" feel overly clinical and unnatural. I suggest a brief copyedit to clean up redundant statements and smooth out the prose. ~2026-41183-96 (talk) 21:15, 23 July 2026 (UTC)Reply