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Latest comment: 2 months ago by TheAuroraBorealis in topic Rewrite needed?

Unclear and confusing

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This article was discussed at Wikipedia:Reference desk/Archives/Mathematics/2024 September 13 § Lines carrying rays. I agree that this article is barely comprehensible, and I've decided to track down the single cited source (ISBN 978-0-387-98650-0) to see if it's any clearer. jlwoodwa (talk) 01:29, 16 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Rewrite needed?

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As it stands, the article looks AI-written, and doesn't comply with the Manual of Style. The lead isn't particularly helpful. --signed, TheAuroraBorealis 15:26, 14 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

At a minimum, the lead needs a rewrite. --signed, TheAuroraBorealis 20:00, 14 May 2026 (UTC)Reply