Talk:DuWayne Deitz

DuWayne Deitz has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 30, 2023. (Reviewed version).

Biography: Sports and Games

	Biography portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography
	Sports portal This article is supported by the sports and games work group (assessed as Low-importance).

College football Low‑importance

	College football portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject College football, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of college football on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.College footballWikipedia:WikiProject College footballTemplate:WikiProject College footballcollege football
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Athletics Low‑importance

	Sport of athletics portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Athletics, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of the sport of athletics on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page and join the discussion.AthleticsWikipedia:WikiProject AthleticsTemplate:WikiProject AthleticsAthletics
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Martial arts

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Martial arts. Please use these guidelines and suggestions to help improve this article. If you think something is missing, please help us improve them!Martial artsWikipedia:WikiProject Martial artsTemplate:WikiProject Martial artsMartial arts

United States Low‑importance

	United States portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions. Template Usage Articles Requested! Become a Member Project Talk Alerts United StatesWikipedia:WikiProject United StatesTemplate:WikiProject United StatesUnited States
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Minnesota Low‑importance

	Minnesota portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Minnesota, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to Minnesota on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.MinnesotaWikipedia:WikiProject MinnesotaTemplate:WikiProject MinnesotaMinnesota
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

GA Review

Latest comment: 2 years ago9 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:DuWayne Deitz/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 00:42, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

Added American, college, high school track coaches, track athlete, shot putters and marines cats
Where'd you get his birthday?
- As with his death date, it was from his from his grave stone - is that allowed as a source?
I guess you couldn't find his birthplace?
No death place?
- Couldn't find birth / death place.
ref 2 is dead and its cited 14 times
- @WikiOriginal-9: Dang it! The Wayback Machine never archived it! What now? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:10, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
  - Maybe contact miacathletics.com? ugh, we might have to fail this nom unless we can find more sources to replace this. Do you have another article you can replace this with? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
    - Awwww yeahhh, I found it. I just went to football on their website and searched the 2018-2019 archives. I archived it. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
      - Great! Maybe you should add the archive in the ref so that we never have to go through this again. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
Is Korean conflict specifically different than Korean War. I cant check ref 2 since its dead. I was trying to add Category:United States Marine Corps personnel of the Korean War
- I'm gonna say yes. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
"In the subsequent years St. Thomas compiled records" comma after years
- Added.
Should we add 1973 and 1979 Minnesota Intercollegiate Athletic Conference (MIAC) Coach of the Year to the infobox? Also the 2 conference titles.
- Added.
"Deitz died on August 22, 2018" I dont see that in the ref?
Wheres his birthday from?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:19, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply