Talk:David Viaene/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:35, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:35, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• I'm not sure "twins" needs to be linked.
• He was placed on injured reserve on August 28, 1988, and after comma not needed
• References:
  • All appear to be consistently formatted and reliable for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 3, 8, 11, 14, 16
  • After being released, he worked in construction with his father and served as a coach for Kaukauna High School.[14] After an injury to Harvey Salem, the Packers re-signed Viaene in October 1992 as a backup tackle.[14] you can remove the first inline cite since both sentences go to the same source
  • Ref 2 and 6 need an access-date

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:02, 26 April 2025 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:58, 27 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 01:43, 27 April 2025 (UTC)

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