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Latest comment: 2 hours ago by Launchballer in topic GA review

Article displays website instead of movie title

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In the last paragraph where it explains what she's currently working on, someone has replaced the movie title with a website URL. 141.35.40.76 (talk) 20:16, 29 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Chloe Cherry/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Launchballer (talk · contribs) 15:28, 23 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: TheBritinator (talk · contribs) 12:33, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I will review this. Seems relatively straightforward.

Hi @Launchballer:, left some comments. TheBritinator (talk) 20:36, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Launchballer Seems good for the most part. Please address the comments on the prose and you should be good to go. TheBritinator (talk) 13:22, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Biography

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  • known as the Amish capital of the US Is this relevant?
I believe a former pornographic actress coming from a highly religious place like that is worth mentioning, especially given that the clause is cited to a news article about Cherry. I found another source where she talks about coming from an Amish community, so I added that to later in the article.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Specify what Spiegler Girls is.
I thought context had made it clear, but added "the agency".--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • changing her name from Chloe Couture in 2017 after finding a mainstream actress with that name I'm a bit confused by this. What was she named before, and when did she become Chloe Cherry?
She changed her name from Chloe Couture to Chloe Cherry in 2017. I reworded that sentence.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Link HBO
Done.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Should probably specify who/what Jules Vaughn and Rue Bennett are. "she and Jenna Foxx played played the characters of Rue Bennett Jules Vaughn and in a pornographic parody of Euphoria"
Added "the characters of", though my Spiegler comment applies here also.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • which she has said made her more money than her porn career and for which she and Jenna Foxx played Jules Vaughn and Rue Bennett in a pornographic parody of Euphoria Should probably start a new sentence after "money than her porn career"
I've rearranged this passage.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Is Maid to Kill linkable? Seems to link to a show from 2007 so I doubt it.
This Maid to Kill seems to be a new creation.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Cherry continued to use her stage name for mainstream roles due to her online fame Again, I don't think it has actually been said what her stage name is in the biography.
I added it earlier.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • and then the films The French Italian and Www.RachelOrmont.com at the Tribeca Festival and San Francisco Jewish Film Festival in June Should probably include a 'respectively' for the two festivals to clear it up.
I've added it and moved 'June' to elsewhere in the sentence.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • After naming her memoir Somewhere Dark and Hot after the impression of Los Angeles Cherry had before moving there, Simon & Schuster scheduled it for publication in 2027 and Cherry discussed it with Rolling Stone in June 2026. This sentence is a bit awkward. Try "Her memoir, named Somewhere Dark and Hot, after the impression of Los Angeles Cherry had before moving there, is scheduled to be published in 2027 by Simon & Schuster." I don't really see the relevancy of the last part.
The relevancy is that AVN ran an article about the interview. I'm uncomfortable saying 'is' per MOS:CURRENTLY (the memoir could change its name or be delayed), but I've reworked that passage.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • Do Filmography sections typically have references? I don't really know.
As far as I'm aware, the films themselves act as primary sources for their own contents (it's very unusual for films not to have credits), and her appearances in all of the films are mentioned in prose, where they are all cited.--Launchballer 14:58, 10 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • check Earwig shows 10% - violation unlikely.
  • check linkdispenser is fine too.
  • check Source 1 (Daily Voice) checks out.
  • check Source 12 (SheThePeople) checks out, but that sentence still needs fixing.
  • check Source 15 (Glamour) checks out.
  • check Source 17 (L'Officiel USA) checks out.
  • check Source 24 (Capital) checks out.
  • check Source 30 (Dazed) checks out.
  • check Source 40 (Paper) checks out.

Scope

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  • check Seems to cover all the bases.

Neutrality

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  • check All prose is appears neutral and without bias.

Stability

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  • check No sign of active edit wars.

Illustration

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