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GA review

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Nominator: Tokeamour (talk · contribs) 03:31, 1 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Jcgaylor (talk · contribs) 04:38, 10 January 2026 (UTC)Reply


Criteria

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Good Article Status - Review Criteria

A good article is

  1. Well-written:
  2. (a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
    (b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.[1]
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
    (b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);[2]
    (c) it contains no original research; and
    (d) it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. (a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;[3] and
    (b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  9. [4]
  10. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  11. [5]
    (a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content; and
    (b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.[6]

Notes

  1. Compliance with other aspects of the Manual of Style, or the Manual of Style mainpage or subpages of the guides listed, is not required for good articles.
  2. Footnotes must be used for in-line citations.
  3. This requirement is significantly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required of featured articles; it allows shorter articles, articles that do not cover every major fact or detail, and overviews of large topics.
  4. Vandalism reversions, proposals to split or merge content, good faith improvements to the page (such as copy editing), and changes based on reviewers' suggestions do not apply. Nominations for articles that are unstable because of unconstructive editing should be placed on hold.
  5. Other media, such as video and sound clips, are also covered by this criterion.
  6. The presence of images is not, in itself, a requirement. However, if images (or other media) with acceptable copyright status are appropriate and readily available, then some such images should be provided.

Review

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  1. Well-written:
  2. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (prose)Could use some polishing across the article. There are many instances of disjointed sentence structure that hamper readability (e.g., "Which would in 1989 and into 2001 be managed by 1st Airborne Command Control Squadron at the Cheyenne Mountain Air Force Station, and later would be renamed the 1st Space Control Squadron." and "During the end of World War II, and during the post–World War II, would lead to in 1957, at the start of the Cold War, the Soviet Union began it's atomic bomb project."). Others are incomplete sentences ("Leading to the introduction of thermonuclear weapons by the mid-1950s.") or begin with a pronoun in a disruptive manner ("Which would support the Aerospace Defense Center's operation of the North American Defense Command primary combat operations center.") Fail Fail
    (b) (MoS)employs awkward usage of "would be" rather than a simple past tense as advocated by the MOS.; One image lacks a caption; certain sections could beneft from being subdivided, such as the post-cold war section; some MOS:1STOCC violations with full names being used more than once and the abbreviations given in parentheses multiple times, such as NORADFail Fail
  3. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
  4. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (references)Most sources passed a spot check, but there were some instances of a source failing to verify the claim to which it is cited. For example, the citation to the Imperial War Museum makes no mention of the Soviet's tsar bomb development in 1961. Likewise, the IBT source makes no mention of 15 service members receiving no face-to-face contact. Ensure that all citations verify the specific claims asserted. Fail Fail
    (b) (citations to reliable sources)Generally, yes. Does rely on some sources with a consensus of generally unreliable, such as the International Business Times and Atlas Obsura, though for rather mundane and non-explosive claims. Still, it would be better to provide citations to more reliable sources.Fail Fail
    (c) (original research)While some verifications failed, these appear to be more likely an oversight than original research. This appears to be a well-sourced article.Pass Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism)copyvio check reveals no likely instances of a violation or plagiarism. Any instances are quoted and sourced correctly.Pass Pass
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (major aspects)The reviewer has left no comments herePass Pass
    (b) (focused)generally passes, but the post-cold war section could use some narrowing in.Fail Fail
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. NotesResult
    The reviewer has left no comments herePass Pass
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. CommentResult
    The reviewer has left no comments here.Pass Pass
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)pass except for the world map used in post-cold war sectionFail Fail

Result

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ResultNotes
On hold On holdThis is a promising article, and with some corrections to these notes would be ready for GA status. I will place this on hold for seven days, following the WP:GAN/I#HOLD recommendation.

Discussion

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Thankyou to the editors that started this GA review. The article actually doesn't seem to flow in chronological history order, and, really I do not believe that World War II actually merits mention here. I have tried to insert some text indicating that by the time the Soviets fielded heavyweight ICBMs that the complex would have almost certainly been destroyed, probably by multiple ultraheavyweight megaton missiles, not just the usual "double-tap" to make sure that one warhead got through if the other failed to arrive for some reason, but this probably needs to be better sourced.

I do not really believe that the term "America's Fortress" belongs in the lead. Kind regards and Happy New Year 2026!! Buckshot06 (talk) 13:59, 10 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Buckshot06 I have updated a majority of the top sections to meet the expectations I will now begin the history sections. Tokeamour (talk) 04:54, 11 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Many thanks for your edits Tokeamour!! Buckshot06 (talk) 14:37, 11 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Let me know when either of you feel the article is ready to be re-reviewed, and I'll take it off hold. Jcgaylor (talk) 23:53, 11 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Buckshot06 Many thanks to yours! Tokeamour (talk) 19:07, 12 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Jcgaylor please take it off hold and go ahead with the re-review. Kind regards, Buckshot06 (talk) 20:37, 17 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Jcgaylor Same here Tokeamour (talk) 23:01, 18 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Second review

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  1. Well-written:
  2. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (prose)Sentence structure has been improved, and other issues addressed. Pass Pass
    (b) (MoS)verb tense problems were addressed. Image caption added. Section trims achieved.Pass Pass
  3. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
  4. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (references)sources pass a spot check Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources)generally unreliable sources have been removed.Pass Pass
    (c) (original research)see (a)Pass Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism)copyvio check reveals no likely instances of a violation or plagiarism. Any instances are quoted and sourced correctly.Pass Pass
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (major aspects)The reviewer has left no comments herePass Pass
    (b) (focused)offending section was sufficiently narrowed. Much better.Pass Pass
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. NotesResult
    The reviewer has left no comments herePass Pass
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. CommentResult
    The reviewer has left no comments here.Pass Pass
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)offending image now has a captionPass Pass

Result

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ResultNotes
Pass PassThis is a strong article, deserving of GA status. Congrats to those that contributed.