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Latest comment: 3 hours ago by Emmanbotan in topic GA review

Image

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This might be a petty request, but would someone be able to replace the current image with a more appetizing specimen? I don't know about you, but I'll take bakery-fresh over the convenience store variety any day... --Julian Grybowski (talk) 16:51, 23 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

will something I make myself do? 86.128.239.121 (talk) 21:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC) sorry, that was me. thought I had logged in Wilsonsamm (talk) 21:29, 4 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Clannad Reference

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I'm pretty sure Nagisa's favorite food is not anpan. When asked early on about it, she said "Not particularly. Though, that said, I don't really dislike it either." or something to that effect (the actual line is probably different, just going off memory here) She eats it because it tends to be the last type of bread left, when all the other ones are sold out at lunch. When she brings it up during the first scene she's seen in, she does so because it's a habit of her's, thinking about what she will eat later, to make her less nervous about something. 24.23.33.195 (talk) 12:11, 3 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

change to red bean bread?

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Red bean bread exists in many Asian cultures, not just Japan 104.1.194.225 (talk) 08:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Anpan/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 10:32, 30 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Emmanbotan (talk · contribs) 23:53, 2 October 2026 (UTC) Hi ill be taking on this review, sounds delicious!😄Emmanbotan (talk) 23:53, 2 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, lists, and tables):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions and alt text):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Small comments

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  • There is too much anpan In the article. you should replace them with words like this dessert or this dish. So it doesn't sound boring.
  • Images are relevent and are licensed which is good!
  • For the history section, You should put both citation 4 and 5 at the end of the sentence reflecting it. I noticed citation 4 being put in an awkward position.