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Latest comment: 8 days ago by Bri in topic Capitalization in lede
Good article1933 Funsten Nut strike has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 7, 2026Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 30, 2026.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Carrie Smith, a leader in the 1933 Funsten Nut strike, was known for picketing while holding a Bible in one hand and a brick in the other?

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:1933 Funsten Nut strike/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: JJonahJackalope (talk · contribs) 01:44, 17 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Chao Garden (talk · contribs) 04:59, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hello @JJonahJackalope: I am reviewing this article. I expect to finish my review by the end of the week. Thank you! Chao Garden 🌱 ~ say hello 04:59, 5 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

I'll be the experienced reviewer to oversight the review process as part of the June 2026 GAN Backlog Drive. Alexeyevitch(talk) 04:29, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Review

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Hello @JJonahJackalope! It was a pleasure to read this article. Here's my review based on this version Special:Diff/1348942510:

Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. Clear and well-written
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. Complies with MOS
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Looks good
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). Spot-check mostly look good, but I noticed some inconsistencies with the Bucki source, so I included more checks from that source. Could you take a look at the entries for Bucki below? Also had a question about the Gomberg p.91 citation, because I can't check it on Google Books myself, unfortunately.

checkY Zumoff p.363 [1-a] checkY Foner p.270 [5-a] checkY Fichtenbaum p.17 [9-c] checkY Fichtenbaum p.19 [15] checkY O'Shea 26-c checkY Fichtenbaum p.40 [30-a] checkY Gomberg p.91 [42-e] -- Can you provide a direct quote to support this? Page 91 is excluded from the Google Books preview, unfortunately.

  • Thank you, I found it by searching for that quote! Not sure why I couldn't find it earlier, sorry for the hassle. - Chao Garden

checkY Bucki p.177 [56-b] -- Is this citation incorrect? On page 177, I don't see any mention of the bargaining agreement; that page is about the civil rights movement.

  • I clicked on the link and on Page 177 there is a sentence that reads, "Within 10 days, the company agreed to most demands, except for recognition of the union." This is present in the first paragraph on that page. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 23:41, 6 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Thank you for the quote! This is such a weird situation... when I search for the quote directly, I find it: [] When I go directly to page 177, I see something different: [] I feel like this is something I'm doing wrong, in any case.

checkY Bucki p.177 [56-c] -- Is this citation meant to be pointing to a page from Feurer's book instead? The sentence starts with "Feurer notes that..." but this citation is for Bucki.

  • The citation appears to be correct as is. On Page 177 there is a sentence (in the same paragraph as I noted above) that says, "In St. Louis, as historian Rosemary Feurer points out, this community activity and the success of the Food Workers Industrial Union laid the basis for the 1934 campaign for a local "Bill of Rights for Negroes" that presaged the postwar civil rights movement, but in this era the movement was based in the African American working class." -JJonahJackalope (talk) 23:41, 6 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Thank you, same situation as above: I was able to find the page & confirm this using the quote. But when I tried to go directly to page 177, I was seeing totally different content (links are above). - Chao Garden

checkY Bucki p.176 [58] -- Again I'm not seeing anything about the cited sentence on this page of the Bucki source. Maybe this is a mistake?

  • Once again, I found the context (this time, searching "1,400" and it was the first result, page 176). But scrolling to page 176 is a totally different page: [] My mistake! (But also, Google Books is being really weird for me.)

checkY Feurer p.40 [60-a] checkY Lang p.33 [70-a]

2c. it contains no original research. No original research
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. Earwig tool shows the Jacobin article from April 2023 has a 57.6% similarity (both the live article and the archive link). But almost all of these are quotes. A couple additional sources have up to 16% similarity, all due to quotes.

 Done There's just one instance that isn't technically part of a quote or a title, from that 2023 Jacobin article: "White women worked on the first floor, while black women worked in the basement of some buildings and on the second floor of others. The bolded part appears in this article. Could you rephrase or quote directly?

3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. Yup, main points addressed
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). Yes, written in summary style & focused on the topic
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. Neutral
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. No edit wars
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. Image license are good:
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. Yes, images and captions are relevant
7. Overall assessment. Article is well-written, comprehensive, and well-cited. Thank you for answering my questions so quickly. I'm happy to pass this as a Good Article.

I'm ready to approve this article once my comments are resolved above. But also, please note, because I am a newbie reviewer participating in Wikipedia:Good_articles/GAN_Backlog_Drives/June_2026, I need to request that an experienced reviewer look at my review & provide feedback before I make my final decision. So for now, I'll put the review in an "on hold" status and try to find an experienced reviewer to take a look at my assessment above. And in the meantime, if you could reply to my comments (especially the Bucki source), that would be great. Thank you! Chao Garden 🌱 ~ say hello 18:09, 6 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

@JJonahJackalope: Thank you so much for responding to my questions above. I've confirmed all of the spot-checks. The quotes you provided really helped... for some reason, that Bucki source shows different content for pages 176 and 177 when I scroll to the pages, but if I search for the quotes, I see the correct snippets in search. This is probably an issue on my end, honestly. I'll look into this more. But yeah, I think this article deserves to be promoted to GA! I'm going to post in the backlog drive Talk page to ask an experienced reviewer to check my work before I make the final approval. Thank you again for your patience & helping me resolve those questions so quickly. Chao Garden 🌱 ~ say hello 00:36, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
Excellent work Chao Garden. You have properly reviewed this against the six GA critieria, and I have no complaints. Well done.
Here's my abbreviated review:
  • 1a, checkY
  • 1b, checkY
  • 2a, checkY
  • 2b, checkY
  • 2c, checkY
  • 2d, checkY
  • 3a, checkY
  • 3b, checkY
  • 4, checkY
  • 5, checkY
  • 6a, checkY
  • 6b, checkY
The reviewer can action the close now. Alexeyevitch(talk) 04:47, 7 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Dclemens1971 (talk) 14:30, 22 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 90 past nominations.

JJonahJackalope (talk) 13:53, 8 June 2026 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Recently passed GA. Spot-checks on citations 46 to 50 done with no issues arising. Yue🌙 (talk) 06:00, 11 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Use of "though"

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"The house burned down, though they installed sprinklers"

- this means that the house had sprinklers but it still burned.

"They installed sprinklers, though the house burned down"

- this means that after the house already burned down, they went to install sprinklers. TooManyFingers (he/him · talk) 03:37, 30 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Capitalization in lede

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Lede uses terms "Black American" and "white American" capitalized as shown. I think the MOS says not to do that, to avoid the appearance of favoring one group of people over another. ☆ Bri (talk) 21:22, 30 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Found it, MOS:WHITE; I think this specific instance is covered in that part of the guide. ☆ Bri (talk) 21:24, 30 July 2026 (UTC)Reply