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2010

December

• Taveta, Kenya - This page must be revised: Link does not work any more, Kilimanjaro was not given by the Queen (Mount Kilimanjaro#Name), Tanzania is no longer socialist.Peter in s (talk) 06:57, 26 December 2010 (UTC)

November

• 1985 National League Championship Series - Needs to be heavily revised for tone (for the most demonstrative passages, see the section on Game 4). This is Wikipedia, not ESPN. --STUART (talk) 07:26, 20 November 2010 (UTC)
• Atlantic City Conference is extremely long and wordy. It could also use many citations. --Ultima Designs (talk) 14:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

October

• Dawoodi Bohra Needs clean up with grammar and spelling. - Sherenk1 (talk) 06:32, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
• El Salvador national football team Needs reliable sources.

September

• Eudokia Komnene has confused 2 individuals and is therefore incorrect, on the whole.
• Indian Music Industry needs more references and information. -- MrFawwaz (talk) 12:00, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
• Yelahanka has multiple issues : wikification, bad grammar, and poor formatting. Can be considered either for clean-up or deletion. --Cae prince (talk) 07:18, 20 September 2010 (UTC)

• Reference added – Rice, B. Lewis (2004). "Mysore: a gazetteer compiled for government". Karnataka Gazetteer. pp. 40–48. Retrieved February 24, 2012. Northamerica1000^(talk) 12:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

August

• SLI has two sections which need wikification and the article itself has insufficient in-line references. John Aplessed (talk)
• Civics In the table, all types of civic theory need citation except the first two.
• Balby Carr Community Sports College.
• Hands_(The_Ting_Tings_song) needs work on references.
• Fair Spend needs wikification and more references. (talk)

July

• Lady Audley's Secret Uses colloquial rather than encyclopedic language. Jackiespeel (talk) 18:14, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
• George Everest: Article not the right place to remark on the state of disrepair of his former residence (even if something #should# be done about it). Jackiespeel (talk) 15:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
• Art vs Science Needs heavy tone editing, as the person who wrote the article obviously hates the band. *This article has been rewritten. It still needs to be rewritten yet again, but it's a much better sight.*
• Gods and Generals (video game) Uses weasel words a bit too much. Also, it desperately needs reliable sources.