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Latest comment: 13 years ago by Rschen7754 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 23:13, 25 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

References
  • Seems to be a typo in the URL on 18.
    •  Fixed
Lead
  • Lead strikes me as a bit short.
    •  Expanded as much as I could
History
  • Got too much going on in the first sentence - I would split up the 3-citation block, and consider breaking it into multiple sentences.
    •  Fixed
  • Ditto with the block of 3 citations later on.
    •  Fixed
  • Two sentences starting with US 295 in a row.
    •  Fixed

Overall this should be fine for GA, but more research would be needed for ACR/FAC. --Rschen7754 23:21, 25 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

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