Talk:Threewalls
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[edit]Hello! I was really impressed with the start of your wikipedia page. The draft definitely has lots of potential and I can't wait to see the end product. I really liked how concise it is, and gets to the point fairly quickly. Something I will say, though, is to be aware of grammatical issues since there seems to be quite a few grammatical issues. Also, I do recommend adding more information into the sections, since some sections are quite small and could do with some more information. Wizzi7 (talk) 03:54, 9 April 2026 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi! I really enjoyed reading your group's Wikipedia draft, you chose such an interesting organization, and I’m glad I got to learn about it. I thought the article had a lot of great information that highlighted important aspects of Threewalls, and it was well formatted and sourced. I noted some grammatical and other errors in my review, but I can’t wait to see the final article. Comm206 (talk) 04:20, 9 April 2026 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi, guys! Your article looks good. The organization is well done and nicely sourced. Some critiques I had were some wordings sounding like advertising for Threewalls rather than stating information about them. Additionally, there's grammar errors found throughout the whole article. I like your choice of non-profit and the formatting of your article, too, though. My peer review goes more into detail about everything I liked or critiqued. I'm excited to see your end product! Lycheewiki (talk) 16:38, 9 April 2026 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello! I'm very impressed with the amount of information about your organization and the Wikipedia page's overall organization! The tone was neutral and your sourcing was appropriate. A critique I have on the article are the occasional grammar issues throughout as well as run-on sentences that could be edited to be more concise. You can find more details on my peer review page. Overall, I appreciate your findings and coverage on Threewalls and the good that they've done! I'm excited for the final draft! Lowkeysesame (talk) 19:09, 9 April 2026 (UTC)