Talk:Phil Boyle
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by AngusWOOF in topic Article cleanup
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[edit]This article needs to be rewritten so it is not a copy paste of his profile on his website. Even if it cites the information, it needs to be paraphrased, and secondary reliable sources independent of the subject should be introduced. Once that occurs, then it can be reviewed for copyediting. I reworded the first few paragraphs, but even those need years and clarification such as when he got his degrees and worked on his law firm. -AngusWOOF (talk) 17:17, 4 September 2014 (UTC)
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