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Latest comment: 9 years ago by Box73 in topic A few suggestions...
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A few suggestions...
[edit]Instead of starting a sentence with a numeral, "There is also a correlation between gender and occupation. 1881 Pentlow fits the traditional model of a 19th century family." you might try: "A correlation between gender and occupation found in 1881 Pentlow fits the traditional model of a 19th century family." Re "Listed Buildings in Pentlow, Braintree, Essex", Good Stuff isn't an author. But not all sources have listed authors. Lastly, you might regenerate your occupational structure chart as the legend colors aren't displayed. Good luck with your project! — βox73 (৳alk) 13:35, 7 April 2017 (UTC)