Talk:NFL Europe/GA1

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 13:27, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Prose

Lede

• Per WP:GEOLAND major landmasses don't need a link, so no need to linke North America and Europe in lede. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Same for the individual countries. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• association football (soccer) - no need to say soccer. Considering this is an article about a European league it's a bit surprising to hear an American expression like this. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Punter pipes to a redirect. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:08, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

General

• Same deal with linking to countries not being necessary. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Might be wise to translate the money to today's standards. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Fox became - probably best to say "television company Fox", to stop someone thinking an actual fox had done so (or someone else with that name). Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• NFL Europe League (NFLEL)- no need to use the acronym if it's never used again in the text, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• US$30 no need to say US. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• when eight of the 32 NFL - be a bit careful with MOS:NUM. We expect numbers in the same paragraph to be either spelt or in number form. Consistency Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Andrei S. Markovits and Lars Rensmann - who are these people? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• annually in London[33] and has also hosted regular-season games in Mexico City and Toronto - just say annually in London, Mexico and Toronto. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Do we need flags in the table per MOS:ICON? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
• Otherwise everything is grand. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:27, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

  Be sure to tag me when you do start, Lee Vilenski. Toa Nidhiki05 03:45, 18 January 2023 (UTC)

  Hi! You'll likely get a message when I close this. I've dropped a few comments above for things I've seen, however, it's not enough to distract from a well written article. There's no reason for me not to pass, but if you get time, please check over the above. Passing. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:19, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.